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Written by KC

15 July 2010 | 120215 words | Work in Progress

Title: War of the Wizards
Author: KC
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Faramir
Warnings: Spanking
Disclaimer: The characters are not mine. They belong to Tolkien.<br>,Please let me know what you think of this story by leaving a comment.

This is number seven in the series that started with Grief, Elf, Wasps and an Angry Wizard and Stubborn Stewards and Bright Red Paddles, Human King, Elven King & One Stubborn Steward, Sweet Revenge or Let Licking Dogs Lie and Elves, Orcs and the Road to Recovery.
Added: Chapter 52


Part 18

Thranduil sat, silent, still holding Faramir’s hand as he watched his son’s chest rise and fall and his breathing becoming ever more laboured. Earlier, Elrohir had applied a warm poultice, soaked in herbs and oils, to Faramir’s chest to assist his breathing. The elf was worried that the young human was developing an infection of the lungs. The twins sat on chairs near the fireplace, Maglor sat on the end of the bed in which Legolas lay, deep in reverie, and Misto slept in his web above Faramir.

“Lord Elrond is resting comfortably. Arwen is with him,” Imrahil said softly as he entered the room and sat down upon the chair that stood beside the bed in which Faramir lay. “I have never seen him so wearied. The healing has taken much from him. Foxling’s breathing worsens,” he added on hearing Faramir’s breathing. “I do hope he is not developing pneumonia.”

“Please help me raise him to a better position, mellon-nin,” Thranduil requested as he pulled Faramir gently to a semi-sitting position, assisted by Imrahil.

With elven agility and grace, Thranduil moved behind his son and sat with his back braced against the wooden bed-head and a leg on either side of Faramir. Imrahil lowered his nephew gently so that Faramir’s back rested against his ada’s chest. The elven King wrapped his arms around his son and crooned softly in Elvish as Faramir stirred slightly and snuffled in his sleep.

“He breathes easier,” Imrahil sighed in relief, after several long moments. “Though I suspect that has more to do with being held safe in the arms of his precious ada, my friend,” he added, eyes a-twinkle. “He has always been a tactile little creature, has my foxling.”

“This one has so much capacity to love. He loves whole-heartedly and unconditionally but demands, no, expects, nothing in return, which tells of a lifetime spent without love,” Thranduil said softly.

“Not without love, my friend. Many loved him although he did not realise it,” Imrahil corrected gently. “But he did grow up without love from the one person from whom it should have been expected, unconditionally.”

“Was Denethor so blind to this treasure he sired?” Thranduil asked sadly, without malice, resting his chin lightly on the red-gold locks atop his son’s head.

“Blinded by grief but alas, no less blind,” Imrahil replied, a sad smile tugging at the corner of his mouth as he watched Faramir.

Thranduil and Imrahil spoke quietly and at great length about Faramir’s childhood as they watched him sleeping. Imrahil related many of the more mischievous antics of his nephews. Twice, Elrohir changed the poultice, tut-tutting as he did so, concerned over his friend’s fever and his continued difficulty with breathing. It was late afternoon when Legolas returned from his reverie.

“How fares Faramir, ada?” Legolas asked as he sat up and swung his legs over the edge of the bed, narrowly avoiding Maglor as he did so, until he was sitting upright with his feet resting on the floor. “He is not breathing right.”

“Nay, elfling. He is still fevered and his breathing, though eased somewhat, is still laboured,” Thranduil replied as he looked intently at Legolas. “You are looking better, though.”

The twins approached Legolas to redress his shoulder wound. They had just finished when all the elves present heard Aragorn’s approach, hearing him ask to be taken to his Steward’s room. It was not long before a flushed and exhausted looking King entered the room. It was obvious that he had come straight from the palace without bothering to change, as he was still in his travel-stained riding clothes.

Aragorn saw Legolas sitting on the bed opposite the window. He smiled brightly and sighed in relief that his friend looked well. Legolas returned his smile. His smile faltered, though, when he looked upon Faramir propped up against Thranduil, in a deep sleep. To Aragorn’s unaccustomed eyes, his Steward looked terrible. Faramir was flushed with fever, which only highlighted the underlying pallidness of his skin.

“Arwen explained that ada was able to counteract the poison but at great cost to Faramir and himself,” Aragorn said as he approached his Steward, resting a palm on his friend’s fevered brow. “By the way, Arwen sends news that ada is feeling better and should be here soon.”

After assuring himself that Faramir was not in imminent danger of dying, Aragorn fussed around his Steward, changing the poultice and fetching a bowl in which he poured boiling water and added athelas leaves. Aragorn, pleased to hear Faramir’s breathing ease a little, left to bathe and change into more suitable clothing. It was not long though, before he returned and joined the twins in front of the fireplace.

Elrond came later that evening but could do little more for Faramir than the twins and Aragorn had already done. Faramir’s fever receded and spiked a number of times over the next three days but did not break. Thranduil sat vigil beside his human son refusing to move despite Elrond’s urgings that he eat and rest and Maglor’s more direct threats.

“You are digging yourself ever deeper, mellon-nin,” Elrond cautioned, as he watched Maglor glaring at his friend from his seated position near Legolas, after refusing yet again to rest. “You do realise that your hide will pay the price eventually for both the recent tantrum that so vexed Maglor and your refusals to rest.”

“I know,” Thranduil replied, screwing his nose in distaste; the same gesture that Elrond had seen gracing Legolas’ face on occasion. “I can see his hand twitching,” he added, trying not to look in Maglor’s direction. “I just wish this damned fever would break.”

It was several hours later, in the early hours of the morning, that the fever did break finally but many hours later Faramir seemed no closer to awakening. Elrond attempted to enter Faramir’s mind to coax him back but found that the Steward was too far away.

“Estel, you will need to go after Faramir and fetch him back to us for I do not have the energy to reach him,” Elrond said to Aragorn who was seated with the twins in front of the fireplace.

“Aye, ada,” Aragorn replied.

He moved to sit on the bed beside Faramir and placed a palm over his Steward’s brow. Aragorn went in search of Faramir. Having done so before, he found it easier to follow Faramir’s trail. He walked for what seemed an eternity, calling out to Faramir constantly but receiving no reply. Just when he was beginning to truly worry, he heard someone singing a lullaby softly. Following the sound he came into a forest clearing and gasped in shock, tears welling in his eyes, at the sight of the two figures before him, one sitting on the ground with his back braced against a large rock and the other lying down with his head resting on the other’s thigh.

Boromir saw Aragorn’s approach. He waved and then put a finger to his lips, gesturing for his friend to approach quietly. Aragorn walked to where Boromir sat, knelt down beside him, placed a hand either side of the Gondorian’s head, bent it towards him, leaned forward and kissed Boromir on the forehead.

“What are you still doing in this place, my friend?” Aragorn asked in a hushed voice as he drank in the sight of the warrior who was gently massaging his slumbering brother’s ear. “I thought you had moved on.”

“There is something, I know not what, brewing. Something in which I have yet a part to play,” Boromir replied with a far away look in his eye. “And besides which, I have had far too much enjoyment watching my little brother run rings around the lot of you,” he added, breaking out into a huge grin as his gaze shifted from the distance and back to Aragorn.

“He is a handful, my friend,” Aragorn replied a little sheepishly. “His fever has broken and he needs to return to us,” the King added gently.

“The poor little mite has had a rough trot over the last year,” Boromir sighed sadly, the love for his brother showing in his eyes, as he looked down upon his sleeping form. “Rouse, miel-neth,” he said quietly. Faramir mumbled something that neither Boromir nor Aragorn could catch but each knew was probably something that should not be repeated in mixed company, or within Maglor’s very acute hearing range, and promptly went back to sleep. “He does not wake well,” he added with a rueful smile.

Aragorn snorted.

“Aye, we have noted, my friend,” Aragorn replied, chuckling at Boromir’s gift for understatement.

“Quick, quick, the library is burning,” Boromir said in a very quiet voice as he leaned over his sibling.

Faramir sat bolt upright, clipping his brother under the chin as he did so, causing both of them to howl in pain and Aragorn to wince in empathy.

“Owwww!!!” Faramir exclaimed as he rubbed the top of his head vigorously. “Are you trying to give me heart failure, you hard-headed oaf?”

“You are not exactly soft-of-head, if soft-headed, yourself, little brother!” Boromir responded as he rubbed his chin.

Aragorn laughed as he watched the interplay between the brothers, gaining a glimpse into what life must have been like when they were together, in life.

Faramir swung around at the sound of the laughter and was surprised to see Aragorn standing there.

“It is time to go back, my Steward,” Aragorn said.

“Aye, little brother. If you do not go back now I fear your elven nanny will do something drastic to your ada. Your ada has been by your side constantly and is most grieved about you,” Boromir added as he stood, assisting his brother to do so as well. Faramir blushed spectacularly at the mention of his elven nanny. Chuckling Boromir embraced his brother. “I love you, little brother,” Boromir said as he held his brother tightly.

“And I you, brother,” Faramir replied, tears welling in his eyes.

Boromir let go of Faramir finally and then pulled Aragorn into a mighty hug.

“I will still be here, little brother,” Boromir assured as Aragorn took Faramir by the elbow and guided him back to those waiting anxiously for him back in the Houses of Healing.

Aragorn came back to himself and could feel the tears streaming down his face and his ada asking him repeatedly what was wrong.

“Boromir was there, still watching over Faramir, sheltering him until the fever broke,” Aragorn said when he had regained some composure.

“What? He has not moved on to the halls of our ancestors?” Imrahil asked, eyebrows aloft.

“Nay, he said there is something brewing and he has yet a part to play…” Aragorn began but his attention was diverted by moans coming from Faramir.

“Open your eyes, ion-nin,” Thranduil coaxed, his relief evident in his eyes.

Faramir moaned again but after a few moments opened his eyes, to be greeted by the relieved expressions of his ada, uncle and Elessar looking down at him. Imrahil raised his nephew to a sitting position as Thranduil held a cup of water that Elrond had given him, to Faramir’s lips.

“Are you in much pain?” Elrond asked.

“Oh, aye!” Faramir exclaimed in a whoosh of breath and a hacking cough in response.

“What hurts, tithen pen?”

“In order of… magnitude?” Faramir asked in return when he finally stopped coughing.

“Yes.”

“Every-damned-thing!” Faramir complained, having difficulty isolating all the sources of pain.

Smiling at the resilience of the human spirit, which never ceased to amaze him, Elrond reached for a vial containing essence of poppy and laced a cup of water with but a few drops, knowing that Faramir was susceptible to even small amounts. He coaxed the Steward in to drinking the potion. It was not long before Faramir was drifting off into a more natural sleep.

“Ada?” Faramir asked as he felt the pain ease and himself start to drift.

“Yes, ion-nin?” Thranduil asked softly.

“Go rest. You do not want Maglor on… your… tail…” Faramir began but drifted off into sleep before he could finish the sentence.

Maglor snorted, Legolas sniggered from his bed and Thranduil blushed furiously.

Faramir slept solidly for twelve hours. When awareness returned, it did so very slowly. He was aware vaguely that someone was singing. He even recognised the tune as one that came from Dol Amroth; a round in which one by one, drunken sailors fall overboard, until there is not one left on board. Each stanza ended with a very high note. The singer kept searching for the note, up and down the register but obviously found it elusive. Faramir also thought to himself that the ship must have contained a whole host of sailors as the singer was down to eight hundred and twenty three, having disposed of one hundred and seventy seven, if the ship had originally had one thousand sailors on board. The voice was familiar to the Steward but, as is the perverse nature of the universe at times, all Faramir’s logic faculties had yet to don gear, let alone muster.

“I suggest you try an octave lower,” Faramir mumbled, eyes still closed.

The singing stopped abruptly. It was at that precise moment that several more of Faramir’s faculties had mustered finally and he knew, without doubt, to whom the voice belonged. Faramir’s eyes flew open, wide.

“What was that, ion-nin?” Thranduil asked above him.

“You hear me?” the voice said.

“What is wrong, ion-nin?” the elven King asked, concerned by his son’s stricken pallor and rapid breathing.

“And you can see me?” the voice said as Faramir’s eyes, widened in panic, tracked the movements of the owner of the voice.

“Faramir! Speak to me,” Thranduil urged.

“I am fine, ada,” Faramir squeaked unsteadily, although his eyes were fixed upon another in the room.

“Oh, he is going to believe that, Fara,” the apparition chided sarcastically. “I had more colour to my cheeks after I had died than you have at the moment, little brother.”

Faramir whimpered.

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51 Comment(s)

I really like what you’ve done with all these stories. I can’t wait to continue reading them. I do have a question. How on earth will Faramir continue to age. Will he get old like gandalf, or just stop like hte elves? Just curious! Keep writing! classacte

— classacte    Thursday 20 April 2006, 5:53    #

when are you going to update this? Poor Chiri, and I can’t wait to see what happens with Sarumon! COntinue soon! classacte

— classacte    Tuesday 2 May 2006, 3:24    #

wow, these stories are great. Can’t wait to read the rest. I’d love to see a flashback of Thranduil and Maglor dealing with the escape of the dwarves since you made it sound so funny. Keep up the good work.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Saturday 10 June 2006, 6:00    #

Hi again. Just curious as to when you will be updating next?

— Daughter of Thranduil    Thursday 13 July 2006, 23:46    #

I LOVE it! Keep up the fantastic work. Just one little question: what does Maglor truely look like? I’ve reread this fiction at least a dozen times & I’m curious to his hair color and style!

— Lori Tankersley    Friday 4 August 2006, 4:14    #

Hi Lori,

Thank you for the kind words and I’m pleased you are enjoying the story. I described Maglor very briefly in Elves, Orcs and the Road to recovery as “a tall blond elven warrior”. I picture him as having long blond hair in the elven way with warrior braids. He is taller than Legolas and Faramir. Of course, like all evles he is stunning with deep blue eyes that seem endlessly deep.

KC    Friday 4 August 2006, 18:10    #

Hee hee! Serves Eomer right for being so nasty to Faramir! I really enjoyed this chapter. Maglor is such a wonderful character. Keep up the great work.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Saturday 5 August 2006, 16:39    #

Thank you!! Maglor has been an absolute hoot to write and I’m pleased it shows through :)

KC    Sunday 6 August 2006, 14:18    #

Great chapter. Loved it.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Wednesday 27 September 2006, 20:52    #

I alsways enjoy your story very much. This chapter was no exception. I think that Eomer got what he deserved and Misto’s reaction/action was what to be expected! ;) Are we starting with the march towards Minas Morgul next? Can’t wait to see how the battle plays out! Patience is not a virtue :)

— maeglina    Monday 2 October 2006, 15:14    #

It’s so good to see a new chapter of this story! Such fun :-)

— Monica    Wednesday 30 May 2007, 9:56    #

Thank you Monica,

It’s been a rough few months but I’m back to writing (whew!). I’ve even started on part 51.

KC    Thursday 31 May 2007, 5:34    #

Welcome back! We missed you!

— Archmage XIII    Saturday 16 June 2007, 7:24    #

Thank you! Good to be writing again. Hope to have the next part finished soon.

KC    Monday 18 June 2007, 12:06    #

Wonderful to see another chapter to this story, I’ve been reading since the beginning on a yahoo group that I lost track of, so I’ very glad you post here. Loved Misto’s armour! Looking forward to the next part.

— wendyuk    Wednesday 1 August 2007, 11:32    #

Thank you Wendy!! It’s certainly been a long journey. I never imagined the story would go in the directions it has LOL. Hope to update Soon. Thanks again :)

KC    Sunday 5 August 2007, 9:10    #

Delighted to see a new chapter of this fun read. It always puts a smile on my face.
BTw – I love your portrayal of Arwen.

— Dixie    Monday 6 August 2007, 0:41    #

Thank you Dixie! Always nice to know that people find something to smile about in my stories. And thank you for the compliment about Arwen!! :)

KC    Monday 13 August 2007, 9:51    #

Since this hasn’t been updated in around 7 months, I gather it’s dead? Shame, as I was enjoying it. I keep checking back periodically to see if there’s an update, but my hopes dwindle.

— Mandy    Saturday 23 February 2008, 22:48    #

Hi Mandy,

Sorry but RL got in the way big time. My country had a welcome change of Government last November. A change of Government, before and after, means a lot of work. The project that I was working was discontinued so apart from looking for a transfer to another organisation, I have more time on my hands now in addition to a new laptop. I have started work on the next chapter and hope to have it finished within the next few weeks.
Cheers
KC

KC    Sunday 24 February 2008, 7:27    #

That comment made me laugh out loud. You must be British. Did no one in England like poor Tony? He seems about as popular as Bush is over here, but I imagine both men meant well. Lord knows what we’ll end up with in Nov. Oh well, I’ll keep checking on the story. Thanks.

— Mandy    Sunday 24 February 2008, 23:57    #

@Mandy:

“You must be British.”

I think not. Blair left us some 5 months earlier, in June, not November, and as he stood down as Prime Minister during the Labour government’s term in office and handed over to Gordon Brown for the rest of that term, it was not a change of government either. Imagine (keeping in mind that prime ministers are not presidents and the two systems are not comparable) that —God forbid— something would happen to Bush: then Cheney would take over until the next elections.

Countries that were in the process of changing their governments around last November include Australia, Denmark, Croatia and Argentina. A glance at KC's email address makes me suspect we're dealing with the first.

PS: If you want to keep up with political affairs around the world (US media are so inwardly focused), the BBC are an invaluable source. Personally I prefer The Economist which has an excellent ‘Politics this week’ section, with matching weekly newsletter.

Admin    Monday 25 February 2008, 8:12    #

Hi Mandy
Admin is right. Blair was extremely popular in comparison to our ex-Prime Minister Howard. We now have a round faced, blond, blue-eyed Labor PM who speaks, of all languages, Mandarin. A breath of fresh air but damn Kevin Rudd’s hard work. He makes workaholics look narcoleptic.

KC    Monday 25 February 2008, 8:53    #

Ouch. And I thought that our lot was bad. Good to hear that this isn’t dead, since I’m rather fond of them. Although, I do find myself feeling sorry for Eomer. Even if he is an ass.

— Jerry    Saturday 22 March 2008, 21:38    #

This is very good! Give yourself a pat on the back! ;)
P.S when is the next chapter coming? it been almost a year since i last read this (Yes i read your stories twice)

— Victoria    Friday 29 August 2008, 2:51    #

Sorry to all who have been following this story. Work has consumed every waking minute both physically and emotionally for over 12 months and has given me nothing but grief and heartache in return. So I start a new job on 15 September that pays more, involves less time and is something I enjoy doing. The upshot is that I hope to have my half completed chapter finished before the end of November. Thank you again all for your patience but I am determined to finish this story and Misto keeps rattling his armour at me menacingly in my dreams!!

— KC    Monday 1 September 2008, 11:25    #

Congratulations on your new job! It is so important to also have time for yourself, not just for work – great to hear you’re finding a better balance. Best of luck!

iris    Thursday 4 September 2008, 11:18    #

Well done on getting a much better job. I know I’m being selfish but I love this story so much please continue it as soon as possible. I enjoy reading and experiencing the way your characters continue to evolve…keep up the good work.

— Annette    Monday 17 November 2008, 20:05    #

Hi. I just found this story and really enjoyed it. I love your characterization of Faramir and the elves. I can’t wait to see where you go with this story next. Please update again soon.

— ana    Wednesday 29 April 2009, 6:31    #

Hi KC!

I just discovered your story, and was well impressed by it. I see you’ve not updated for a while, and I’m guessing RL got in the way? I hope all is well and that you keep writing as you’ve got a great talent. Thanks for all your effort!

— Aqua    Tuesday 1 September 2009, 7:29    #

Hey, as I said before but this time it different, I think you should consider publishing this but I’ll think it’ll be a short book but still! and yep this is much be…fourth time I read this? It just too enjoyable :D

— Victoria    Tuesday 20 October 2009, 0:01    #

Please do finish this story.
Even though I don’t second your “love” for spanking, you write so well that I need to know how it ends.
Don’t keep us in the dark.
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

— lille mermeid    Sunday 31 January 2010, 19:15    #

Hi all,
Sorry to have gone MIA for so long but 2009 was a hard year. Worked like a dog on a successful project and won an organisational award.

Went to another project job, worked like a dog and won another organisational award.

Went into a non-project job in the same organisation and four days later retrenchment packages were offered to all. Much to the chagrin of the bosses, mine was too good to refuse and has set me up for life.

Left work and looked forward to writing again. Unfortunately I had to look after an ailing mother for three months. Mother is now better. Looked forward to writing again.

Unfortunately, bosses begged me to come back as a contractor. In a moment of weakness said yes. Still working but am starting to write again only to face a bit of writer’s block.

Whew!! What a year!!

— KC    Monday 1 February 2010, 22:06    #

Hi KC,

I have very much enjoyed your series of stories beginning with Grief and currently ending in War of Wizards. They are a very fun read, you really give a charming personality to characters I’ve always loved and wanted to know more about, such as Faramir, and his uncle Imrahil’s family.

No pressure whatsoever, but if you do write more in the future, I will be happy to read. In particular, I wonder whether Saruman realizes how thoroughly he may be outclassed in cunning by the fox cubs and their families and friends. I also wonder whether Eowyn has decided to accompany the soldiers from Rohan in the War of the Wizards, since Eomer elected to leave her in Rohan, and it seems the type of thing she might do again, this time for the purpose of watching Farmir’s back. I’m also interested in seeing the first meeting between Eomer and Imrahil’s daughter, and Faramir’s elven family and Eowyn. If I can be of any assistance in terms of proofreading or hashing out ideas, please feel free to drop me a line.

Best of luck with everything,

Susana R.

— Susana R    Sunday 23 May 2010, 7:46    #

I am doing the happy dance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t wait to read the rest of this wonderful story, full of humour and adventure.

You were one of the writers who made me want to write Faramir Fan Fiction.

— Lille Mermeid    Thursday 15 July 2010, 16:48    #

KC, It’s wonderful to see you writing again! Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic stories with us, and I hope life is treating you better now. This is one of my favourite stories, and an update is a lovely excuse for a re-read! Thank you again. Wendy

— Wendy    Thursday 15 July 2010, 20:34    #

You’re back!! How wonderful! I enjoy your stories so much and to see an update to War of Wizards has made my day! Thank you so very, very much!!

— Libraryblue    Thursday 15 July 2010, 20:51    #

Happy to see You back and for that reason I re-read whole story once again. Thank You!

— Cicely    Sunday 18 July 2010, 5:43    #

Lovely to see you writing again! The personalities and interactions of your characters are as delightful as ever. Still brings a smile to my face!

— trixie    Thursday 22 July 2010, 5:40    #

Hello,

I have just finished reading the entire series you wrote. I have enjoyed so much that I can’t help but ask you to continue. Everything, from the idea of younger ones being spanked, to larger roles of some characters, to the amused elderly Elves, to fox cubs… I don’t know, just everything seems so right. This series has had me both on the edge of tears and chuckling throughout the reading. I enjoy Faramir fictions and the way you’re writing this one, intertwining the memories and the presence, going into the depths with each character yet not going out of them (OOC) is amazing. I would very much like to see this to be finished some day.

Thank you very much for the delightful experience of being able to read the brilliantly written story.
And I do apologize, for this comment doesn’t make up even for the half of it, but there is so much I can’t quite put into words at the moment. Am still stunned at how you managed to do it and how good it came out.

Best regards,
A.

— Aneyrin    Thursday 23 December 2010, 21:10    #

OMG! I love these stories so much they have had me laughing and crying at Faramirs exploits! I cant wait to read the rest :) x

— key    Friday 25 February 2011, 19:50    #

Wow, Your stories are wonderful.
I couldn’t stop reading them until the end. I almost cry when I saw that war of the wizards wasn’t finished. (ok, it was probably the nerves since I didn’t sleep in two nights that I spent reading. XD)
You’re a very good writer and these fics are just very interesting, and the plot is fun and intriguing at the same time.

Bye!!!!!

— Girlytiger    Thursday 21 April 2011, 22:32    #

I love this series i will admit i never thought about faramir being adopted by elves please please please update soon.

— Nikki    Monday 11 July 2011, 2:35    #

great story – please do continue.Can hardly wait for how it ends. thanks for writing.

— joe    Monday 2 January 2012, 10:43    #

Greeting, dear KC!

I just re-read War of Wizards and enjoyed it as much as I did the frist time through. I still had fits of laughter and giggles throughout the reading and I swear someone was peeling onion at certain times when I was reading.

This site hasn’t heard from you in a while, but I do hope you’re well and will once continue writing and posting this wonderful story you created.

Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with whatever it is you’re doing in your life currently,
A.

— Aneyrin    Tuesday 17 July 2012, 22:01    #

Hi KC,

I hope all is well in your life and you still have the time to write.

Just wanted to thank you for the great story and for the sharing of it .
It is amazing how you manage to create such a wanderfull time line and I just love the characters and the way they interact .

Looking forward to the next chapters and a happy end of the story .

Many thanks for your work.
Good luck in life and happiness .
BlackSwan

— BlackSwan    Thursday 14 February 2013, 6:20    #

Hi KC, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for sharing it. I know it’s been a long time since you updated it and hope everything is alright in your life. I hold out hope that this fantastic story will eventually be finished. Again thanks for the story and good luck in your life.

— Anna    Thursday 5 June 2014, 20:41    #

Hi – thanks for a great read. I’m assuming this story has been abandoned – or is continued on a 3rd site? Can you advise?

— tiinaj1    Thursday 20 July 2017, 3:37    #

Are you going to update this anytime soon. I’m dying to figure out what happens! I love Love LOVE!!!! these stories please keep writing. ;)

— Alexa    Sunday 29 July 2018, 19:41    #

Very enjoyable and fulfilling read! Is this story still in the making, or has it been abandoned? I hope not the latter! So much want to find out how it ends!

— Treedweller    Saturday 19 January 2019, 10:48    #

Me again. I’ve just read the entire series up to here for the third time. It looks like this has been abandoned? Alas, so many of us are dying to find out what happens! Thank you for your work and for sharing it with us.

— Treedweller    Friday 14 June 2019, 13:27    #

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