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Written by KC

15 July 2010 | 120215 words | Work in Progress

Title: War of the Wizards
Author: KC
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Faramir
Warnings: Spanking
Disclaimer: The characters are not mine. They belong to Tolkien.<br>,Please let me know what you think of this story by leaving a comment.

This is number seven in the series that started with Grief, Elf, Wasps and an Angry Wizard and Stubborn Stewards and Bright Red Paddles, Human King, Elven King & One Stubborn Steward, Sweet Revenge or Let Licking Dogs Lie and Elves, Orcs and the Road to Recovery.
Added: Chapter 52


Part 17

“His fever is worsening,” Aragorn murmured, concern evident as he felt the heat of Faramir’s brow with the palm of his hand that rested there. “We must needs get him back to Minas Tirith as quickly as possible.”

“Is that advisable given his condition?” Thranduil asked quietly, stroking his son’s hair.

“We do not have the medicines needed and his condition will only deteriorate out here in the elements,” Aragorn advised gently.

After the morning rations were consumed, the soldiers broke camp and preparations were made for the journey back to the White City. Legolas, who was conscious if very sore, complained bitterly that he was more than capable of sitting on a horse by himself, that was, until Maglor gave him a look that quelled the younger elf instantly and had him looking like an elfling again – all eyes. Gimli chuckled at his friend’s expression, but was quelled equally as effectively by a look from the Seneschal.

“I am still very much vexed with your sire at the moment, Thranduilion. I would suggest that you do not push me,” Maglor responded tartly, turning his gaze once again upon Legolas.

Legolas looked at his ada with a questioning raised eyebrow. Thranduil was mounted and cradling Faramir, who was still either sleeping or unconscious. The elven King simply pretended not to hear his Seneschal’s vexed words or see his elfling’s questioning expression. Legolas chose the wise course of remaining silent and doing as he was bid as Maglor mounted the horse behind him. Gimli, with Misto clinging to his back, rode with Aragorn.

The troop travelled as far as they could as fast as they could before Aragorn called a halt in the early afternoon to rest the horses and check on both Faramir and Legolas. Whilst the soldiers rested and ate, Maglor readied boiling water and healing herbs and salves for the two patients. The twins tended to Legolas while Aragorn and Thranduil tended to Faramir. Gandalf, Gimli and Finrod hovered in the background and Misto settled near his mama. The twins changed the dressings on Legolas’ shoulder wound, pleased to see that it was healing well. Aragorn and Thranduil removed the soiled cloak and blanket from Faramir; and were met with the distressing sight of blood soaked bandages. Despite the healing salve that had been applied, the wounds on the Steward’s back had become infected.

At that moment Faramir awoke to a world of pain. Thranduil took hold of his son’s hand and crooned quiet, soothing words in elvish. Faramir concentrated on his ada’s voice, trying desperately to divorce himself from the pain, wishing that the fogged detachment he had felt earlier would return but it did not.

“Faramir! Stay with me, tithen-pen,” Aragorn called to his Steward, as he removed the bloody bandages, aware that Faramir was on the verge of losing consciousness again. “Something is amiss here. He should not be in such pain. Faramir, Faramir! Open your eyes, stay with me, pen-neth. Were you given anything by the abductors, food, liquid?”

“Potion… so could not… use powers,” Faramir gasped out through gritted teeth as he squeezed his ada’s hand hard as another spasm of pain caused his muscles to contract violently. Thranduil kept up a litany of soothing elvish words as Faramir writhed and arched, his body in agony.

Gandalf groaned, causing Aragorn to look at him sharply with a questioning expression before being distracted by Maglor passing him a brew for pain and fever, which the Mirkwood elf had prepared. Thranduil raised Faramir to a semi sitting position so that Aragorn could feed him Maglor’s brew.

“Drink this,” Aragorn said as he held the tea to Faramir’s lips. “That is it, mellon-nin,” he continued as Faramir swallowed the liquid.

Still writhing as the agonising muscle contractions continued, Faramir drank the foul tasting brew without complaint, in between gasps for breath, so great was his pain. Again the brew did not have as fast an effect on the Steward as in the past. Aragorn waited until Faramir had drifted finally into the blessed oblivion of sleep before seeking clarification from Gandalf on the wizard’s groan earlier and tending the foetid wounds on his young Steward’s back.

“The potion of which Faramir spoke would, in all likelihood, have been a poison of Morgul make,” Gandalf sighed deeply before Aragorn had asked the question. “I know of no other that could strip a wizard of his power. It is altogether evil.”

“Will we never be free of the evil shadow of that fell place and its poisons?” Aragorn exclaimed, as he finished applying clean bandages to Faramir’s wounds. “What can we do for him Gandalf?”

“We must get him to Elrond as fast as possible,” Gandalf replied. “Only Vilya, the elven healing ring, will be able to counter such a vile potion in time.”

“I will ride out now and take Faramir to Minas Tirith, Estel. Maglor, the twins and Finrod can accompany me,” Thranduil added when he could see Aragorn about to object. “We will be much faster and can, with our elven sight, ride throughout the night.”

Aragorn paused for a moment before closing his eyes and nodding once in agreement.

“I can ride too, ada,” Legolas said from his supine position near Faramir.

Thranduil looked at Maglor who nodded agreement for both knew that worry over Faramir could cause a debilitating grief reaction in the younger elf.

“Alright my elfling but only if you ride with Maglor,” Thranduil cautioned.

Legolas screwed his nose in distaste at the condition placed on him but nodded his head in agreement, knowing that it was not the time to argue.

It was not long before the elves set out for Minas Tirith with Faramir held in the safe arms of his ada, Legolas with Maglor and Misto with Finrod at Thranduil’s request, much to the elf’s surprise. Finrod thought it wondrous strange that any elf of Mirkwood would befriend a spider let alone their King. The elves arrived at the White city just on dawn the following morning, having ridden throughout the night as fast as they could allow the horses to travel in the dark. Thranduil had grown ever more concerned for Faramir as they raced towards the White City for his son had yet to regain consciousness, was beginning to have difficulty breathing and his fever had climbed ever higher. Despite the early hour of their arrival, Imrahil, Elrond and Arwen met the elves and Faramir in the courtyard in front of the palace. Elrond had sensed their coming and roused the others.

Imrahil groaned when he saw his nephew, unconscious and obviously seriously hurt, cradled in Thranduil’s arms. Elrond, understanding the severity of Faramir’s condition immediately, moved quickly to take the young human from Thranduil, who released his precious burden reluctantly, and walked quickly towards the Houses of Healing with Thranduil, the twins and Misto close on his heels. Maglor assisted Legolas, who was in danger of slipping into reverie at any moment, to dismount. He then swept the exhausted elf off his feet and took him to the Houses of Healing with Imrahil and Arwen in tow. Finrod stayed to see to the horses.

“What happened?” Imrahil asked as he walked beside Maglor.

“This one took an arrow to the shoulder trying to protect his brother but should be back to his normal irritating self in a few days,” Maglor said affectionately, eliciting a sleepy grumble from Legolas.

“And Faramir?” Arwen asked as she walked on the other side of the Mirkwood Seneschal.

“I am aggrieved to say that he has been whipped to within an inch of his life by his abductors and has been fed an evil brew of Morgul make,” Maglor replied, eliciting gasps from both Arwen and Imrahil.

Maglor, Arwen and Imrahil arrived at the Houses of Healing and entered the room in which Faramir had been placed. Maglor was thankful to see that the room contained two beds. Faramir had been placed on the bed closest to the widow, which overlooked a garden. Maglor placed Legolas on the other bed, against the wall opposite the window. The young Prince had slipped into reverie.

Elrond and Thranduil had already removed the cloak and blanket in which Faramir had been wrapped for the journey to the White City and were just removing the bloodied bandages. Elrohir and Elladan had gone to fetch Elrond’s healing supplies and boiling water. Misto was busy spinning a web in the corner of the room above Faramir’s bed, all the better to keep an eye, or in this case, many eyes on his mama. Arwen and Imrahil stood back out of the way; ready to do anything that was requested of them. Elrond, aware that Faramir had been given, in all likelihood, a potion of Morgul origin for Thranduil had to him so, gasped on seeing the state of Faramir’s back.

The twins arrived with their father’s healing supplies, bandages, cloths and boiling water in a large kettle that they put on a stand near the fire that was alight in the fireplace. Elrond placed his ringed hand upon Faramir’s forehead, closed his eyes and sought out the poison.

“It is of Morgul,” Elrond sighed.

“You can help him, can you not?” Thranduil asked in a breathless whisper, pale at the thought of losing Faramir.

“I can neutralise the poison but it will not be easy. It will be extremely painful for him and will tax him sorely,” Elrond sighed. “I cannot give him anything for pain until after the poison has been neutralised. His condition is not good and he is having trouble breathing. He may not survive, mellon-nin,” Elrond said gently.

“My son is stubborn and he will survive,” Thranduil countered adamantly, though tears welled in his eyes.

Elrond bathed Faramir’s back with warm water containing herbs and potions designed to kill infection and promote healing. He then applied healing salve and clean bandages. Sitting down on the bed beside Faramir, he waved Thranduil to sit on the other side of his ailing son. Thranduil held Faramir’s hand as Elrond placed his ringed hand over the young human’s face and began chanting in Elvish. Vilya began to glow. Even unconscious, Faramir moaned and then writhed in agony as Elrond continued. The Steward woke abruptly and began screaming from the sheer agony. He felt as if he was being consumed by fire from the inside. The screaming and writhing did not abate. Agitated, Misto started hissing but remained in his web.

“Oh … Valar, help me, ada! Hurts! Boromir! … help me! … Ada!” Faramir screamed, writhing in agony.

Tears streaming down his face, Thranduil held Faramir’s hand through the entire ordeal as Faramir arched in pain, again and again. Imrahil began pacing like a caged lion as he watched his sister’s son’s agony. Arwen wept gently, arms wrapped around herself protectively, flanked by the twins. Both twins placed their arms around their sister. Legolas, awoken from his reverie by his brother’s screams, was held and comforted by Maglor both with tears in their eyes. Still the screaming did not abate.

“Please… stop… hurts… stop, ada!” the young Steward cried out, his voice becoming hoarse from the damage done to his vocal cords.

To all present, it was obvious that Elrond was struggling. The normally regal and calm elf was looking distressed and pained. Just when Thranduil could take no more of his son’s agony and screams and was about to ask Elrond to cease the torture, Faramir’s screams ceased and he fell back on the bed, limp. Elrond collapsed over his patient.

Elladan ran to pull his father off Faramir and Elrohir moved quickly to check Faramir. Thranduil felt his heart shatter at the thought that his beloved son was dead. Arwen hurried over to her father’s supplies and pulled out a small vial. Taking the top off the vial she moved to her father and waved the vial under his nose. Elrond shook his head from side to side to escape the pungent fumes but it still took him several long moments before he regained consciousness.

“Faramir still lives, King Thranduil,” Elrohir said, eliciting a trembling sigh of relief from the elven King.

“The poison is neutralised, mellon-nin,” Elrond said wearily, looking more tired than Thranduil had ever seen the Rivendell elf, “but the battle is yet to be won. He is weak and fevered.”

“Yet he lives and where there is life there is hope,” Thranduil replied in a horse whisper, filled with emotion.

“Go rest ada… “ Elrohir said.
“ … we will look after Faramir… ” Elladan continued.
“ … and Legolas.”

“Hannon le, ions-nin,” Elrond said with great weariness as he made to stand.

Imrahil walked over to his nephew, bent and kissed him on the brow before assisting Elrond to his feet and out of the room. Arwen squeezed Thranduil’s shoulder, eliciting a small smile from him, before turning and following her father out of the room. Maglor still rocked Legolas who had slipped back into reverie. Elladan and Elrohir bathed sweat from Faramir’s face and arms and made sure that the young human was made comfortable before sitting in vigil on two chairs near the fireplace. It was going to be a long, long day.

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51 Comment(s)

I really like what you’ve done with all these stories. I can’t wait to continue reading them. I do have a question. How on earth will Faramir continue to age. Will he get old like gandalf, or just stop like hte elves? Just curious! Keep writing! classacte

— classacte    Thursday 20 April 2006, 5:53    #

when are you going to update this? Poor Chiri, and I can’t wait to see what happens with Sarumon! COntinue soon! classacte

— classacte    Tuesday 2 May 2006, 3:24    #

wow, these stories are great. Can’t wait to read the rest. I’d love to see a flashback of Thranduil and Maglor dealing with the escape of the dwarves since you made it sound so funny. Keep up the good work.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Saturday 10 June 2006, 6:00    #

Hi again. Just curious as to when you will be updating next?

— Daughter of Thranduil    Thursday 13 July 2006, 23:46    #

I LOVE it! Keep up the fantastic work. Just one little question: what does Maglor truely look like? I’ve reread this fiction at least a dozen times & I’m curious to his hair color and style!

— Lori Tankersley    Friday 4 August 2006, 4:14    #

Hi Lori,

Thank you for the kind words and I’m pleased you are enjoying the story. I described Maglor very briefly in Elves, Orcs and the Road to recovery as “a tall blond elven warrior”. I picture him as having long blond hair in the elven way with warrior braids. He is taller than Legolas and Faramir. Of course, like all evles he is stunning with deep blue eyes that seem endlessly deep.

KC    Friday 4 August 2006, 18:10    #

Hee hee! Serves Eomer right for being so nasty to Faramir! I really enjoyed this chapter. Maglor is such a wonderful character. Keep up the great work.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Saturday 5 August 2006, 16:39    #

Thank you!! Maglor has been an absolute hoot to write and I’m pleased it shows through :)

KC    Sunday 6 August 2006, 14:18    #

Great chapter. Loved it.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Wednesday 27 September 2006, 20:52    #

I alsways enjoy your story very much. This chapter was no exception. I think that Eomer got what he deserved and Misto’s reaction/action was what to be expected! ;) Are we starting with the march towards Minas Morgul next? Can’t wait to see how the battle plays out! Patience is not a virtue :)

— maeglina    Monday 2 October 2006, 15:14    #

It’s so good to see a new chapter of this story! Such fun :-)

— Monica    Wednesday 30 May 2007, 9:56    #

Thank you Monica,

It’s been a rough few months but I’m back to writing (whew!). I’ve even started on part 51.

KC    Thursday 31 May 2007, 5:34    #

Welcome back! We missed you!

— Archmage XIII    Saturday 16 June 2007, 7:24    #

Thank you! Good to be writing again. Hope to have the next part finished soon.

KC    Monday 18 June 2007, 12:06    #

Wonderful to see another chapter to this story, I’ve been reading since the beginning on a yahoo group that I lost track of, so I’ very glad you post here. Loved Misto’s armour! Looking forward to the next part.

— wendyuk    Wednesday 1 August 2007, 11:32    #

Thank you Wendy!! It’s certainly been a long journey. I never imagined the story would go in the directions it has LOL. Hope to update Soon. Thanks again :)

KC    Sunday 5 August 2007, 9:10    #

Delighted to see a new chapter of this fun read. It always puts a smile on my face.
BTw – I love your portrayal of Arwen.

— Dixie    Monday 6 August 2007, 0:41    #

Thank you Dixie! Always nice to know that people find something to smile about in my stories. And thank you for the compliment about Arwen!! :)

KC    Monday 13 August 2007, 9:51    #

Since this hasn’t been updated in around 7 months, I gather it’s dead? Shame, as I was enjoying it. I keep checking back periodically to see if there’s an update, but my hopes dwindle.

— Mandy    Saturday 23 February 2008, 22:48    #

Hi Mandy,

Sorry but RL got in the way big time. My country had a welcome change of Government last November. A change of Government, before and after, means a lot of work. The project that I was working was discontinued so apart from looking for a transfer to another organisation, I have more time on my hands now in addition to a new laptop. I have started work on the next chapter and hope to have it finished within the next few weeks.
Cheers
KC

KC    Sunday 24 February 2008, 7:27    #

That comment made me laugh out loud. You must be British. Did no one in England like poor Tony? He seems about as popular as Bush is over here, but I imagine both men meant well. Lord knows what we’ll end up with in Nov. Oh well, I’ll keep checking on the story. Thanks.

— Mandy    Sunday 24 February 2008, 23:57    #

@Mandy:

“You must be British.”

I think not. Blair left us some 5 months earlier, in June, not November, and as he stood down as Prime Minister during the Labour government’s term in office and handed over to Gordon Brown for the rest of that term, it was not a change of government either. Imagine (keeping in mind that prime ministers are not presidents and the two systems are not comparable) that —God forbid— something would happen to Bush: then Cheney would take over until the next elections.

Countries that were in the process of changing their governments around last November include Australia, Denmark, Croatia and Argentina. A glance at KC's email address makes me suspect we're dealing with the first.

PS: If you want to keep up with political affairs around the world (US media are so inwardly focused), the BBC are an invaluable source. Personally I prefer The Economist which has an excellent ‘Politics this week’ section, with matching weekly newsletter.

Admin    Monday 25 February 2008, 8:12    #

Hi Mandy
Admin is right. Blair was extremely popular in comparison to our ex-Prime Minister Howard. We now have a round faced, blond, blue-eyed Labor PM who speaks, of all languages, Mandarin. A breath of fresh air but damn Kevin Rudd’s hard work. He makes workaholics look narcoleptic.

KC    Monday 25 February 2008, 8:53    #

Ouch. And I thought that our lot was bad. Good to hear that this isn’t dead, since I’m rather fond of them. Although, I do find myself feeling sorry for Eomer. Even if he is an ass.

— Jerry    Saturday 22 March 2008, 21:38    #

This is very good! Give yourself a pat on the back! ;)
P.S when is the next chapter coming? it been almost a year since i last read this (Yes i read your stories twice)

— Victoria    Friday 29 August 2008, 2:51    #

Sorry to all who have been following this story. Work has consumed every waking minute both physically and emotionally for over 12 months and has given me nothing but grief and heartache in return. So I start a new job on 15 September that pays more, involves less time and is something I enjoy doing. The upshot is that I hope to have my half completed chapter finished before the end of November. Thank you again all for your patience but I am determined to finish this story and Misto keeps rattling his armour at me menacingly in my dreams!!

— KC    Monday 1 September 2008, 11:25    #

Congratulations on your new job! It is so important to also have time for yourself, not just for work – great to hear you’re finding a better balance. Best of luck!

iris    Thursday 4 September 2008, 11:18    #

Well done on getting a much better job. I know I’m being selfish but I love this story so much please continue it as soon as possible. I enjoy reading and experiencing the way your characters continue to evolve…keep up the good work.

— Annette    Monday 17 November 2008, 20:05    #

Hi. I just found this story and really enjoyed it. I love your characterization of Faramir and the elves. I can’t wait to see where you go with this story next. Please update again soon.

— ana    Wednesday 29 April 2009, 6:31    #

Hi KC!

I just discovered your story, and was well impressed by it. I see you’ve not updated for a while, and I’m guessing RL got in the way? I hope all is well and that you keep writing as you’ve got a great talent. Thanks for all your effort!

— Aqua    Tuesday 1 September 2009, 7:29    #

Hey, as I said before but this time it different, I think you should consider publishing this but I’ll think it’ll be a short book but still! and yep this is much be…fourth time I read this? It just too enjoyable :D

— Victoria    Tuesday 20 October 2009, 0:01    #

Please do finish this story.
Even though I don’t second your “love” for spanking, you write so well that I need to know how it ends.
Don’t keep us in the dark.
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

— lille mermeid    Sunday 31 January 2010, 19:15    #

Hi all,
Sorry to have gone MIA for so long but 2009 was a hard year. Worked like a dog on a successful project and won an organisational award.

Went to another project job, worked like a dog and won another organisational award.

Went into a non-project job in the same organisation and four days later retrenchment packages were offered to all. Much to the chagrin of the bosses, mine was too good to refuse and has set me up for life.

Left work and looked forward to writing again. Unfortunately I had to look after an ailing mother for three months. Mother is now better. Looked forward to writing again.

Unfortunately, bosses begged me to come back as a contractor. In a moment of weakness said yes. Still working but am starting to write again only to face a bit of writer’s block.

Whew!! What a year!!

— KC    Monday 1 February 2010, 22:06    #

Hi KC,

I have very much enjoyed your series of stories beginning with Grief and currently ending in War of Wizards. They are a very fun read, you really give a charming personality to characters I’ve always loved and wanted to know more about, such as Faramir, and his uncle Imrahil’s family.

No pressure whatsoever, but if you do write more in the future, I will be happy to read. In particular, I wonder whether Saruman realizes how thoroughly he may be outclassed in cunning by the fox cubs and their families and friends. I also wonder whether Eowyn has decided to accompany the soldiers from Rohan in the War of the Wizards, since Eomer elected to leave her in Rohan, and it seems the type of thing she might do again, this time for the purpose of watching Farmir’s back. I’m also interested in seeing the first meeting between Eomer and Imrahil’s daughter, and Faramir’s elven family and Eowyn. If I can be of any assistance in terms of proofreading or hashing out ideas, please feel free to drop me a line.

Best of luck with everything,

Susana R.

— Susana R    Sunday 23 May 2010, 7:46    #

I am doing the happy dance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t wait to read the rest of this wonderful story, full of humour and adventure.

You were one of the writers who made me want to write Faramir Fan Fiction.

— Lille Mermeid    Thursday 15 July 2010, 16:48    #

KC, It’s wonderful to see you writing again! Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic stories with us, and I hope life is treating you better now. This is one of my favourite stories, and an update is a lovely excuse for a re-read! Thank you again. Wendy

— Wendy    Thursday 15 July 2010, 20:34    #

You’re back!! How wonderful! I enjoy your stories so much and to see an update to War of Wizards has made my day! Thank you so very, very much!!

— Libraryblue    Thursday 15 July 2010, 20:51    #

Happy to see You back and for that reason I re-read whole story once again. Thank You!

— Cicely    Sunday 18 July 2010, 5:43    #

Lovely to see you writing again! The personalities and interactions of your characters are as delightful as ever. Still brings a smile to my face!

— trixie    Thursday 22 July 2010, 5:40    #

Hello,

I have just finished reading the entire series you wrote. I have enjoyed so much that I can’t help but ask you to continue. Everything, from the idea of younger ones being spanked, to larger roles of some characters, to the amused elderly Elves, to fox cubs… I don’t know, just everything seems so right. This series has had me both on the edge of tears and chuckling throughout the reading. I enjoy Faramir fictions and the way you’re writing this one, intertwining the memories and the presence, going into the depths with each character yet not going out of them (OOC) is amazing. I would very much like to see this to be finished some day.

Thank you very much for the delightful experience of being able to read the brilliantly written story.
And I do apologize, for this comment doesn’t make up even for the half of it, but there is so much I can’t quite put into words at the moment. Am still stunned at how you managed to do it and how good it came out.

Best regards,
A.

— Aneyrin    Thursday 23 December 2010, 21:10    #

OMG! I love these stories so much they have had me laughing and crying at Faramirs exploits! I cant wait to read the rest :) x

— key    Friday 25 February 2011, 19:50    #

Wow, Your stories are wonderful.
I couldn’t stop reading them until the end. I almost cry when I saw that war of the wizards wasn’t finished. (ok, it was probably the nerves since I didn’t sleep in two nights that I spent reading. XD)
You’re a very good writer and these fics are just very interesting, and the plot is fun and intriguing at the same time.

Bye!!!!!

— Girlytiger    Thursday 21 April 2011, 22:32    #

I love this series i will admit i never thought about faramir being adopted by elves please please please update soon.

— Nikki    Monday 11 July 2011, 2:35    #

great story – please do continue.Can hardly wait for how it ends. thanks for writing.

— joe    Monday 2 January 2012, 10:43    #

Greeting, dear KC!

I just re-read War of Wizards and enjoyed it as much as I did the frist time through. I still had fits of laughter and giggles throughout the reading and I swear someone was peeling onion at certain times when I was reading.

This site hasn’t heard from you in a while, but I do hope you’re well and will once continue writing and posting this wonderful story you created.

Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with whatever it is you’re doing in your life currently,
A.

— Aneyrin    Tuesday 17 July 2012, 22:01    #

Hi KC,

I hope all is well in your life and you still have the time to write.

Just wanted to thank you for the great story and for the sharing of it .
It is amazing how you manage to create such a wanderfull time line and I just love the characters and the way they interact .

Looking forward to the next chapters and a happy end of the story .

Many thanks for your work.
Good luck in life and happiness .
BlackSwan

— BlackSwan    Thursday 14 February 2013, 6:20    #

Hi KC, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for sharing it. I know it’s been a long time since you updated it and hope everything is alright in your life. I hold out hope that this fantastic story will eventually be finished. Again thanks for the story and good luck in your life.

— Anna    Thursday 5 June 2014, 20:41    #

Hi – thanks for a great read. I’m assuming this story has been abandoned – or is continued on a 3rd site? Can you advise?

— tiinaj1    Thursday 20 July 2017, 3:37    #

Are you going to update this anytime soon. I’m dying to figure out what happens! I love Love LOVE!!!! these stories please keep writing. ;)

— Alexa    Sunday 29 July 2018, 19:41    #

Very enjoyable and fulfilling read! Is this story still in the making, or has it been abandoned? I hope not the latter! So much want to find out how it ends!

— Treedweller    Saturday 19 January 2019, 10:48    #

Me again. I’ve just read the entire series up to here for the third time. It looks like this has been abandoned? Alas, so many of us are dying to find out what happens! Thank you for your work and for sharing it with us.

— Treedweller    Friday 14 June 2019, 13:27    #

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