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The Coldest Winter (R) Print

Written by Geale

09 January 2009 | 77501 words

Alternative title of this chapter: ‘The very many chairs’ or ‘Why is there no good synonym for ‘chair’?’) After dinner comes dessert! If you prefer tea and cake, please skip this chapter.

Chapter 12 – Sitting

The sky had cleared and the moon was riding the dark heavens in the southeast, steadily climbing higher and higher. The winter stars, for once, were able to shine down without being covered up by snow-filled clouds. Fascinated, they now and then peered in through the windows, studying how the King and the Steward tried to move closer to each other while seated in different chairs.

Unaware of this, Aragorn, mesmerised, was watching how Faramir picked up a handful of dried cranberries and unhurriedly ate them one by one. Upon imagining how they would clash with the sweetness of his Steward’s mouth, Aragorn knew he was more than a little affected by the wine.

After their last visit, when they had brought some more wood for the fire and wine for the table, Aragorn had bid the servants withdraw for the night – if the delegation from Erelas had no more demands. Now they were alone, and the King found he appreciated that to such an extent, he almost began to wonder about his own, normally well grounded, sanity.

However, at seeing Faramir lick his lips after finishing off the berries, he happily let go of all such ponderings.

“You are eyeing me most intently, my lord,” Faramir smiled, raising his eyebrows. “Is there anything you wish to ask?”

He had shifted in his armchair, sitting diagonally in it so that he might face Aragorn a little easier. A small part of the King envied the ease with which he moved about – not mentioning the many ways in which he was able to place his legs – but the greater part of him had accepted his situation.

“Well?” Faramir persisted and leaned forward.

By the way his eyes had glazed over, Aragorn could tell the wine had some power over him as well.

“No,” he answered, “no questions.”

“No? I am disappointed,” Faramir stated, holding his gaze. “Nothing at all you wish to communicate?”

Aragorn returned his smile. “Now that you mention it,” he said, “there might be something we need to engage in. But you need to get over here.”

Promptly, Faramir shuffled closer and without waiting, Aragorn caught his lips in a possessive kiss.

They sat kissing for a while until Faramir cringed uneasily.

“I need to move,” he groaned into Aragorn’s mouth. “My back is telling me this is not an ideal position.”

The King reluctantly let him go and sank back into his armchair, watching the other man scan the room with a look of deep dissatisfaction.

“Only chairs,” Faramir concluded at last. “Makes things more complicated.”

Aragorn had trouble hiding his smile. Yet again, his lover managed to make a charming picture: his hair slightly dishevelled, and once more he wore one of those frowns that made him look years younger. However, this time, the undertone of pure lust was apparent, he saw as he studied Faramir’s face and movements. Aragorn had no complaints.

“Chairs…” he mused, “it might be a good thing, you know.”

“How is that?” Faramir shot him a quizzical glance.

“Well, if I remember correctly, we were… hrm, encouraged… to try that particular… arrangement,” he finished off rather lamely, remembering with embarrassment the Healer’s never-ending lesson on techniques and positions.

“Oh.”

Two hands went straight for the table and two cups of wine were lifted and brought to two separate mouths. Aragorn drank down most of the dark red liquid in a desperate attempt to forget what he had been forced to listen to that afternoon.

Naturally, a part of him was grateful that they had been provided with ideas on how to… proceed with matters, it was just the circumstances that bothered him – and maybe that the Healer so obviously enjoyed to see them blush and mutter incomprehensible curses. With a fatherly nod, he had, at long last, ended his sermon and with an expectant pat on Aragorn’s shoulder he had wished them good luck, and bid them seek him out if they experienced any ‘trouble’.

“So…” he said now, replacing his cup on the table.

“Right,” Faramir offered.

Then things seemed to shatter completely for him and Aragorn broke into sudden laughter.

“This is insane,” he panted between breaths.

Faramir sat watching him with an expression of amused bewilderment. He took another sip of wine but said nothing.

Aragorn collected himself enough to speak properly.

“I am sorry,” he smiled, shaking his head. “It has been a long day. Where were we?”

“In a chair,” Faramir winked at him. “Or rather, in separate ones, unfortunately.”

“You know that can be arranged.”

“Yes… that is true…” Faramir presented a serious face. “But you know, Aragorn…” He paused.

“What is it that I know?” Aragorn eyed him carefully, as if the answer would appear on his forehead, much like the script on the One Ring among flames.

“It means we will have to deal with what happened this afternoon. Can you handle that?”

Faramir might just as well have undressed right there, right then. A tingle of excitement ran through Aragorn as he returned the challenging look the other man sent him.

“Indeed, I can,” he said. “And I will prove it.”

He watched as Faramir, a little unsteady, got up, lifted the small table – along with its contents – from its place in front of the fire, and set it down where it would not be in their way. Then he positioned his own chair in front of Aragorn’s so they could face each other.

Sitting down again, he gave an awkward smile. “I am drunk,” he admitted.

Aragorn leaned forward so their knees touched, and placed a hand on each of Faramir’s thighs. “And so am I.”

He had never before been kissed by Faramir in such a fashion; up until this point their kisses had, with a few exceptions, mostly been tentative, sweet and lingering. It was still sweet, but much bolder and far more daring.

Faramir’s lips crashed against his own and almost immediately, his tongue swept inside Aragorn’s mouth. One hand wove into his hair and drew him even closer, while the other snaked around his waist and savagely tugged at his tunic. When pulling at it resulted in nothing particular, Faramir abandoned this mode of procedure and instead worked his way underneath the material.

Aragorn was so taken aback by this new attitude, that for a couple of seconds, he barely knew how to respond. Even if it was all due to the wine, he was certain he liked it. Soon, he found his wits and had the decency to moan appreciatively as determined fingers brushed over his nipples. He heard the rasp of the other chair against the floor as Faramir tried to eliminate the remaining distance between them.

“Closer,” he groaned when Faramir let him go long enough to catch his breath.

“Cannot – too many chairs.”

He found Faramir’s lower lip and caught it between his teeth. Sucking on it, he drew a long, low sigh from its owner. Satisfied with the reaction, Aragorn released him.

“Too many?”

Faramir was seated on the very edge of his armchair and his hands were still moving across Aragorn’s chest underneath the tunic. They slowed down as he fixed the King with a firm stare.

“I think so,” he stated. “One has to go.”

“Time for some reminiscing, then.”

Under normal circumstances (less wine), Aragorn might have been nervous – and he was quite sure Faramir would have been so as well. They would have discussed it; every possible problem and difficulty would have been brought up, examined and dealt with. That was probably a good thing, given that this situation was still new to them. The thing was, Aragorn realised, that right now, he cared nothing for precautions of that type.

Managing to push the image of the Healer to the very back of his mind, without forgetting his advice, he slid down lower in his armchair. Faramir, who interpreted his movements correctly, withdrew his hands from underneath the tunic, got to his feet and fetched a fairly large cushion that belonged to one of the other chairs. On his way back, he took the opportunity to add some wood to the fire which merrily sprung up in the fireplace.

Stooping over him, Faramir bent down and placed a kiss on Aragorn’s lips, while handing him the cushion. The King slipped it behind his back, and gratefully rested against it.

Responding to the kiss, he felt Faramir’s hands beginning to tug at his clothing once more, but this time he stopped him. Soon enough they would undress, but there was something he wanted to try with his lover before that.

Letting go of the Steward’s lips, and feeling very bold indeed, he raised his hands and caught hold of the laces that held Faramir’s leggings together. Slowly he untied them, but it was not until he actually revealed, and touched, the half-awakened arousal he found there, that Faramir drew a sharp breath.

Bringing his mouth very close to the flesh, he spoke in a voice that was low enough to match his mood, but loud enough to be heard:

“I want to do this for you, since you will be doing very much for me.”

Without waiting for a response, he tenderly placed a kiss on the skin before him, not failing to notice the tremor that ran through Faramir, and not being able to ignore the hands that took a firm grip on his shoulders. It had been long since Aragorn pleased a man in this way, but he doubted he had forgotten how it was done.

Faramir’s manhood lay embedded in soft, curly hair; in the firelight it glowed with the same copper tone as the hair on his head did. Another kiss he placed there, and then another. He planted a series of kisses along the shaft that hardened visibly at the touch.

It sounded almost as if Faramir was holding his breath above him, and Aragorn chanced a peek at him. Faramir was standing with his eyes closed and his lips slightly parted.

If it had not happened earlier, the full potential of this night suddenly hit Aragorn.

“Open your eyes,” he said softly, “I want you to see everything. How beautiful you are.”

Faramir slowly did as he requested. And even slower he lowered his gaze. His eyes widened as he registered the image of Aragorn’s lips so close to his arousal.

“That is it,” whispered Aragorn , “keep watching.”

With those words he set to work.

With one hand he held on to Faramir’s hips, and he used his other to extract the full length of his arousal from underneath the fabric. He licked the member from the base and up, eliciting a moan and a shudder from the other man. Gently, he pushed back the skin that hid the swollen head and circled it with the tip of his tongue. Faramir’s fingers increased their grip on his shoulders.

“Do you like it?” Aragorn asked, forcing himself to hold back. He was feeling the force of his own arousal plainly, but he wanted to prolong the night as much as possible.

“Yes,” Faramir answered him in a voice gone hoarse from unexpected stimulation.

This time, after one more stroke of his tongue, Aragorn took the hard shaft in his mouth and sucked carefully. A gasp told him at least he had accomplished something, and seconds later, a hand in his hair, urging him on, let him know he was doing well.

He sucked harder then, and was pleased to notice how Faramir began to respond. The hips Aragorn still held on to mimicked his mouth’s movements, and even though the thrusts were small, they were there. His breathing, albeit heavy, was steadier and more regular.

Releasing his hips, Aragorn’s hand began to explore the skin underneath the tunic Faramir wore. He could feel both of the Steward’s hands in his hair now.

The swollen shaft was throbbing as Aragorn stroked it, rather forcefully, with his tongue. Faramir let out a deep groan and abruptly removed one of his hands from among Aragorn’s tresses. Swiftly, he pulled out a little from the wet cavern of the King’s mouth, and pinched the base of his length hard.

As Aragorn looked up on him, he could see that his chest was heaving, and there were pearls of sweat on his forehead. His eyes were slightly unfocused, but on his lips had formed a sweet smile.

“Not yet,” Faramir said hoarsely, “I believe there is more to come.”

He shrugged out of his leggings that slid to the floor and landed around his boots in a heap. Kicking them off, he also got rid of the leggings, and seconds later he had pulled off his tunic as well. Still very much aroused, he fell to his knees between Aragorn’s legs, his back to the fire.

“Are you cold?” he asked, making an odd picture as he himself was completely undressed.

Aragorn smiled, shaking his head. The flames in the fireplace spread their warmth generously – for once he had no need of a blanket wrapped around him. “No.”

As Faramir pulled off his boots, Aragorn undid the laces on his own leggings. He waited until the Steward was done with his feet before he attempted to undress any more.

When Faramir’s eyes landed on Aragorn’s groin he raised an eyebrow and flashed a grin.

“Good to see I am not the only one…” he said, helping his King out of the unnecessary constraints, including his tunic.

Aragorn watched as the warm, orange light skidded across his lover’s skin as he moved. It highlighted his muscles where it reached, and created a stunning backdrop to the scene that was played out before him.

Faramir, still on his knees, placed a palm against Aragorn’s chest, and ran it down his upper body. He followed his own progress intently as his hand slid lower and came to a rest on Aragorn’s bare stomach.

Silently, Aragorn willed it lower. He wanted to be touched, wanted that hand around his arousal which twitched as the image appeared in his mind.

“You know…” he said, not knowing how to word his thoughts, “we have made love… I would like to…” He made a vague gesture with his hand and tried to look as comfortable and sure of himself as he had been only moments ago.

Faramir raised his eyes to meet him. “You mean…” Traces of his former grin were still on his lips. “You mean that you simply want to…” He inclined his head in an agreeing sort of way.

“Some of that bravery and boldness would do,” Aragorn suggested, relaxing a little.

A light appeared in the younger man’s eyes at the words – a light that went right to Aragorn’s stomach and there transformed into a small firework.

“Boldness…” Faramir mused, “yes, I think we can have some of that…” He let his hand travel further down. “Now, what was it that we were told today? That first of all, we should be comfortable. Are you comfortable, Aragorn?” he asked as his fingers encircled the risen royal member.

A wave of pleasure and satisfaction washed over Aragorn as the man in front of him began stroking. “Yes, definitely comfortable,” he sighed, raising his hips a little as to underline his statement.

The King felt himself swell in Faramir’s hand; heat streamed through his body and pooled in his groin.

“And you?” he asked.

“I am very comfortable,” Faramir assured him, voice slightly raspy. “Which leads us to the next question: are we aroused enough?” He brushed his thumb across the sensitive tip of the heated flesh in his hand.

At the touch, Aragorn groaned, and felt the rest of his body quickly melting away. “Can you not feel that,” he grunted, closing his eyes to concentrate on the feeling.

“True, I can. But we are supposed to make sure.”

“Then I need to feel you.”

The stroking ceased and something shifted around him. When Aragorn opened his eyes, he found that Faramir was standing on his feet, leaning over him, hands on the armrests of Aragorn’s chair. His hardened member arched out from his body.

“Question number three,” Aragorn murmured, “will you manage this position?”

Faramir let go of one of the armrests and held out his hand in which lay a small vial of oil.

“There is only one way to find out,” he smirked. “But you have not yet made absolutely sure I am aroused enough.”

Aragorn took the oil and coated his fingers, feeling a smile tug at the corners of his mouth.

Oh, yes, he would make sure.

He leaned forward, but contrary to what Faramir had meant, he slid his hand around his backside and instantly searched for the opening that would take them to the next stage.

Faramir inhaled sharply when he realised what Aragorn was doing. “You are not following protocol!” he hissed as Aragorn’s fingertips brushed his orifice. Nonetheless, he spread his legs a little wider.

“I got carried away,” Aragorn smiled and raised himself up further so his lips came close to Faramir’s bobbing manhood.

As he slid one finger inside his lover’s body he simultaneously kissed the flesh presented to him. Faramir moaned deeply above him.

Aragorn knew the importance of this hour. The last time he had done this, things had been profoundly different. Casting away all thoughts on doubt and insecurity, which proved to be surprisingly easy once he had made the decision, he thanked the Valar for wine, and then slid a second finger inside the tight channel he was about to breach.

He scissored and stretched, eliciting groans from Faramir as his muscles reacted to the intrusion and then gradually relaxed. Adding one more finger, Aragorn began to feel very hot and ready himself. Faramir swayed backwards in the only motion that enabled him to stay in his pose and also bring Aragorn’s fingers deeper into him.

Kissing the head of Faramir’s engorged shaft, he asked, “Ready?”

Faramir nodded vigorously. “Yes… yes.”

“I want you.” Aragorn’s body was screaming, the tip of his member leaking already.

Briefly letting go of Faramir, he used some more oil to, as quickly as his mind might work his hands, slick himself to further ease the way.

“Tell me if I hurt you.”

Aragorn met the eyes of his love. “If you hurt me?”


He smiled. He knew it was a silly smile: a blend of excitement, lust, possessiveness and love. Nevertheless, he smiled – as Faramir stepped back and he slid down even lower in his armchair. As Faramir placed one foot on either side of his legs, leaned forward and supported himself by holding on to the armrests. As he lowered himself down onto Aragorn’s throbbing arousal. He smiled all along.

They moved together; the heat that surrounded the King wrapped around his Steward as well and he was breathing deeply. Faramir did his best to use his strength not to crash down on Aragorn too hard, and Aragorn held back, not wanting to thrust too wildly.

Now it was Faramir who was leaking; pearly drops formed on the tip of his shaft, wetting Aragorn’s skin.

Summoning his last shreds of intelligence, Aragorn placed a hand over his lover’s hardness and caressed it in any way he could manage. It was not very elegantly done, he supposed, since he was too focused on his presence inside Faramir, but at least it was something.

To Faramir it did not seem to matter in which way he did it. The Steward let out a loud moan and desperately tried to reach Aragorn’s mouth with his lips. It proved impossible as Aragorn’s thrusts increased at the sight of his lover responding to him so. He heard himself groan as he rode the same waves of pleasure.

Brushing against the tight bundle of nerves somewhere inside that heat, Aragorn felt Faramir shudder and tremble against him. A few more strokes and Faramir came with a growl and a cry, his seed shooting over Aragorn’s stomach.

His ecstasy had Aragorn almost falling off the edge as well. Faramir was panting and shaking before him, eyes closed and with hair that was one great mess of sweaty curls.

“Come for me, Aragorn,” he asked hoarsely.

Tightness exploded into a cascade of sparks. Crying out, Aragorn spent himself deep within Faramir who finally collapsed against him.

Not minding to pull out of his lover, Aragorn wrapped his arms around him and together they rocked, experiencing the beautiful, shaky aftermath.


The person who had been standing outside the room had not missed the cries of ecstasy that seeped through the closed door.

Eyes narrowed and a plan began to take form.

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51 Comment(s)

OMG—all I can say is WOW

— Liv    Saturday 19 July 2008, 14:29    #

Started to read a chapter or two and read eight chapters! I love the variety of emotions they experience as the story progresses.

— trixie    Wednesday 23 July 2008, 5:13    #

Thank you for reading and liking! Makes me very, very happy!

— Geale    Wednesday 23 July 2008, 8:48    #

Love the turn this story has taken: very different from the usual and yet very credible within the context you have created for the two of them!

— Ebbingnight    Wednesday 13 August 2008, 21:44    #

Still reading and enjoying. Absolutely love the interaction between the two of them!
I do believe poor Faramir thinks more than I do ;)

— trixie    Thursday 14 August 2008, 17:55    #

Thank you, thank you!
Hehe, yes, our dear Faramir certainly has an active mind. The story continues… I don’t seem to have the heart to end it, so please, do continue reading! :)

— Geale    Thursday 14 August 2008, 19:40    #

I so often see this pairing portrayed in a way that makes it seem like they are in a relationship because it is convenient. That or Aragorn tolerates Faramir’s adoration.
It makes me so happy to read a story where they are so clearly in love!

— trixie    Thursday 28 August 2008, 15:30    #

OMG! JERK! how do you just go whacking the king i hope faramir kicks deren’s ass next chapter coz we all know that he’s the one who did it.

magos    Friday 12 September 2008, 18:10    #

Haha! Instead of writing another chapter, I should just send you over to Minas Tirith to straigthen things out! ;)

— Geale    Friday 12 September 2008, 18:28    #

This is fantastic! It’s been quite a while since I hit a ‘TBC’ and actually groaned aloud. :P You’ve got a real talent – thank you so much!

— Lasselanta    Tuesday 21 October 2008, 5:29    #

Gods, thank YOU! I don’t know exactly what made you groan, but it must have been the lo-ve-ly Deren! ;) Have faith, all of you – there will be a new chapter arriving, hopefully this week. This season is alway hectic so I don’t have that much time on my hands right now. Thank you for your patience!

— Geale    Tuesday 21 October 2008, 20:03    #

Oh I love this story. I want to take Deren out myself. I hope Faramir gives it to him when he finds out he’s the one. These two need some happy time. I cant wait for more.

— Kelly    Thursday 23 October 2008, 19:38    #

Ugh! I almost yelled out loud when I realized this chapter ended here! I cant wait to find out what happens next!

— Kelly    Monday 27 October 2008, 14:15    #

evil! that is an evil ending! man! totally dyin to know what happens here.

ange    Monday 27 October 2008, 21:11    #

Cliffie? What cliffie? Who, me? NEVER! :D Imagine instead how horrible it would have been if the whole story had ended here and now… Oh, I am so happy to see you engage in this! We have holidays over here this week so I’ll probably do some writing sooner than later this time around. Keep those yells coming ;) I DO love you all!
//the author who is feeling just a tad bit evil tonight

— Geale    Tuesday 28 October 2008, 0:08    #

Oh this vile little man! I’d like to teach him a lesson. I hope he gets his. Poor Faramir. I just knew he was going to be in trouble in the next chapter. Awesome work. Can’t wait for more as always.

— Kelly    Monday 10 November 2008, 23:19    #

Ouch! That was low. Deren doesn’t miss a trick, does he? Please don’t let Aragorn be merciful with this one like he was Grima. This is no time to be noble.

Thanks!

— Vanwa Hravani    Friday 14 November 2008, 16:29    #

Aaw, he’s a sweet one, isn’t he? So… what would an appropriate punishment be?

— Geale    Saturday 15 November 2008, 17:35    #

OMG! Poor Faramir – this one truly makes my stomach hurt. Awesome job! I feel so bad for these two. I hope the Valar grants them some happiness soon and some swift, and hopefully painful, punishment to that horrible creature.

— Kelly    Monday 17 November 2008, 18:10    #

Keep writing! I keep loving it.

— Vanwa Hravani    Sunday 23 November 2008, 3:59    #

Excellent! Truly Excellent! That was well worth the wait. Thank you.

— Kelly    Thursday 11 December 2008, 18:03    #

exhaaaaaaales Thank you! (I actually said that out loud a couple of times.) I was honestly quite nervous when posting this chapter since I don’t want to disappoint you and yet… well, I’ve given all of my reasons above. Hah! I feel much more at ease now! resumes breathing

— Geale    Thursday 11 December 2008, 18:56    #

Ilove the way you describe those two, it’s a lovely variation of the more usual fare. Although I got used to the concept of mpreg in fantasy [however could THAT happen? ;-)] I prefer your way, especially in this case. I’m always happy to discover a new chapter. Thanks for sharing!

— Minkicat    Saturday 13 December 2008, 0:37    #

Thank you, thank you! I’m falling more and more in love with this story as I go along and I will be sad to see it end. I’m insanely happy that, so far, you all seem to approve of my decision regarding Aragorn’s future children. Don’t worry, I have it all worked out. I actually do. Hugs to you all! Oh, and cookies!

— Geale    Monday 15 December 2008, 22:02    #

I’m rather glad you have gone with a more canon solution to their issues. It makes it easier for me to think it really happened that way! ;-)

— trixie    Saturday 20 December 2008, 12:47    #

So even as you let Aragorn be merciful, you won’t let the little bastard off the hook? I admit he deserves a bit more than a smack on the fingers…
Merry Christmas and a very happy and content New Year to you!

— Minkicat    Tuesday 23 December 2008, 17:31    #

Geale, still loving every bit of it. So glad Aragorn finally got the marriage thing sorted out (took him long enough, the brute!). And the healer is, of course, loved. But please, please, please, can’t some Ranger skewer Deren with an arrow somewhere beyond the borders, out of loyalty to Faramir and anger at the pain D caused him? Cause the Rangers are the voice of truth and just vengeance, right? Please? He can float down a melting river with arrows in his back – maybe he tried to sneak back in to Gondor? Please?

Will love whatever you do. Thanks!

— Vanwa Hravani    Saturday 27 December 2008, 12:50    #

Trixie: I do get your point ;)
Minkicat: Same to you! I’ve been debating with myself since forever what to do with Deren… and this was my solution.
Vanwa Hravani: I’m considering… I am. I think that maybe you gave me an idea actually. I do hope all of you will endure a never-ending epilogue! I should try to work it into the last chapter though… OK, I’m rambling. Let me see what I can do for you! And, YES, I took him some time to finally ask the big question! Men… ;)

— Geale    Saturday 27 December 2008, 16:51    #

As Always truly excellent. I will be sad to see this story end as well. I anxiously await each new piece. So glad they are finally together forever. I think some copper locked children would be nice also. However, I think Legolas or Haldir could be persuaded to get our dear Deren between the eyes for his treachery. I’d volunteer to do it myself but I’m sure I’m not nearly as good with a bow. Then let the scavengers have him. Cruel I know but I so hate anyone trying to hurt our Faramir. Poor lad has suffered enough. Thanks so much for this story. I have enjoyed every bit of the ride.

— Kelly    Tuesday 30 December 2008, 21:42    #

I’ve loved reading this fic! you portray the relationship so beautifully! It’s tender and sweet and hot all at the same time:)

— minx    Thursday 1 January 2009, 11:43    #

Oh Geale! That was the most beautiful yet, and that’s saying something. I could feel each touch, and every one was so full of pure love. Lust born of love is such a special beast, and so hard to portray. Yet you did it in spades. Now I’m in love with both of them. Sigh. Your Aragorn is the most gentle and loving and truly admirable I have read. These two both have such strength of character. I’ll be awaiting the epilogue with baited breath – as many parts as you like. Write on lady!

VH

— Vanwa Hravani    Friday 2 January 2009, 18:57    #

You’re all so sweet – thank you!
Kelly: I’ll put you in my next story, if you’ve worked up your skill with a bow by then ;) We shall see what happens in the epilogue…
Minx: I’m glad they’re not only fluffy, but hot as well! That’s always so… very nice, I find ;)
Vanwa: I’m blushing over here. You spoil me! Not saying I don’t like it, though! I’m actually curious about what you will think of the epilogue – which will be in two, long parts. And that’s partially your fault! :D

— Geale    Friday 2 January 2009, 22:07    #

Thank you for including me. I shall practice diligently as to be ready for my challenge. This last part was wonderful. My curiosity is piqued for the epilogue. I can hardly wait.

— Kelly    Monday 5 January 2009, 17:36    #

What I will think about the epilogue? Ah…Sigh. Big long exhale. Love it. Love them. Love your writing. Thank you!

Very happy to see Deren get an arrow in his back, in his gullet, in wherever else he got them. Really like the way Eachann tries to be merciful, yet flashes on Elessar’s ‘unspoken wish,’ how when he finally lets fly, it’s without thought but with the smooth immediacy of both necessity and justifiable honor, targeted by the unseen voice and years of skill. Just as I would picture one of Faramir’s Rangers. What a strong and touching legacy of his command, followed by scenes of his continuing grace as a parent. Also like how Eachann went back the next morning to retrieve his arrows, both covering his tracks and not wasting even good iron on the trash that was Deren. In few words, shows that both the man and what happened to him are unworthy of further notice. The ultimate vengeance. He is only a blip in the past.

The parent sex scenes (early morning, curious children) were oh so well written and so true to life without being either saccharin or unrealistically feral. They speak of deep and abiding love, strengthened, rather than interrupted, by the presence of children. And what to say about the final gifts of naming and of cradling in one another’s arms and Creation? Well, I’ll have to follow Aragorn’s advice here. The words would never do. Know that I’m smiling and content and so enjoyed the journey. Thank you.

— Vanwa Hravani    Friday 9 January 2009, 15:42    #

Phew, I’m glad I did justice to the rangers! Since I’m not very used to writing – any of – them. But I do happen to like Eachann actually, and I figured that he should be the one to… bring matters to an end.

I’m certainly not used to writing family scenes either, but after I had sorted out Eldarion’s character, I just couldn’t stop! (If I’m allowed to say so myself – I love him!)

But, no matter how many children Aragorn concieved, I don’t want his and Faramir’s relationship to change into either a boring one, or a chokingly fluffy one. They are still individuals, and they have their own story – the children, as you say, are adding to it, simply.
And thank YOU for coming all this way with me. New journeys await. Let us see where they take us.

— Geale    Saturday 10 January 2009, 17:05    #

Ooh! That was quite the perfect epilogue. I am glad their relationship endures with the same quiet intesnity. I love how sweet and loving these two remain with each other, and how perfect they are with the kids! I also liked the little bit where Faramir feels for the mother as well. I tink he certainly would be cognizant of her feelings.

Quite a perfect ending, and the sequel is most looked forward to:)

— Minx    Sunday 11 January 2009, 17:01    #

Thank you Minx! Perfect, you say? You won’t hear me complaining… ;)
No, I can’t see Faramir punishing the mother or the kids like that. Ah! He’s so noble it’s endearing!

Now, I am working on a new story, but it’s not a sequel, and has nothing to do with TCW. Primarily because presently I don’t know what a sequel would be like. But who knows, one of these days maybe I will? Thank you again!

— Geale    Monday 12 January 2009, 12:30    #

Absolutely wonderful!!!!!!! Eachann is my hero!! I love that Deren got what was coming to him. And there will be some slightly copper haired children after all. I’m so glad with how everything turned out. I love Mirairael’s name. That was perfect! What a great story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

— Kelly    Monday 12 January 2009, 18:13    #

Oh I forgot to ask before. I was wondering on the pronunciation of Mirairael’s name. I made the assumption that the ai will follow the long I in pronunciation. Is that right? That is a beautiful name. Just wondering for my own amusement. Thank you

— Kelly    Monday 12 January 2009, 20:16    #

Finally got caught up in a timely manner! I have truly enjoyed this tale. It is romantic without being cloyingly sweet. I adore the teasing and banter between the two along with the dry wit.

I have been intrigued by your use of personification and especially liked,’ Her white apron immediately drew the attention of the firelight which excitedly coloured it orange.”

I thought it added a sense of realism that Faramir experienced hurt at Aragorn’s determination that his line must continue. (Doubt if Aragorn would have been thrilled if the situation were reversed either ;-)

Finally, the scene back in chapters 8 and 9 with the under the table seduction was one of the hottest things I have ever read. Wow!

Thank you for sharing!

— trixie    Monday 12 January 2009, 20:39    #

Kelly! Thank you dear! It’s lovely to see so many exclamation marks in a row ;)
I was quite happy with her name too. As for the pronunciation… Well, since I made it up myself (sort of, not stealing the light of glory from Master Tolkien who created the languages) I could not say for certain. Also, I’m far more used to Sindarin than I am to Quenya. However – bear with me now – this is my guess:

‘Mir’ – ‘meer’, as we know already from Faramir’s name.
‘ai’ should be pronounced ‘ai’, as in ‘rye’, which here I would rather see pronounced as ‘a + i’, to tell you the truth, ie as separate vowels.
As for the vowels that are not any of the six diphthongs ( ai, au, eu, iu, oi, ui), I’ve heard that they are to be pronounced separately.
So that should give us: Meer-ai-ra-el?

Anyone who knows this better is welcome to share their knowledge – I have an email address!
I hope I managed to shed some light, though. Perhaps…

— Geale    Monday 12 January 2009, 21:05    #

Trixie, you too have made it to the end! And with some very nice comments as well. I like those!

Yes, I am the person who personifies a lot. But it does make the world so much more interesting! And I highly suspect I will carry on with this winning (?) concept in the future.

And, actually, now that you mention it… I think Aragorn would have been most displeased, had it been Faramir who must take a lover in order to continue his bloodline… That is a very interesting thought indeed!

Ah, the chapters 8 and 9… As a dear reader of mine put it: “The good old under the table action”. I guess that I should include some “on top of the table action” next time ;)

And thank you for reading! For my part, it’s been a pleasure writing!

— Geale    Monday 12 January 2009, 21:23    #

That was kind of what I was thinking. Thank you for the assistance. I think its a cool name. Also I agree wholeheartedly with the under the table seduction scene. I know I read that several times, especially the hallway parts when Aragorn informed Faramir he didnt like to share “anything”. If I had Faramir I wouldn’t share him either.

— Kelly    Monday 12 January 2009, 21:45    #

No, our King doesn’t like sharing… and it now it has served to inspire me further. Give me a couple of days! ;)

— Geale    Tuesday 13 January 2009, 15:22    #

Well now, this sounds intriguing! Since I have some free time this week, I’ll be waiting to see what you come up with ;)

— trixie    Tuesday 13 January 2009, 17:07    #

Oh I just love when you are inspired. Means good reading for me! I’m on the edge of my seat

— Kelly    Tuesday 13 January 2009, 23:17    #

what a wonderful story! i couldn’t stop reading it! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

— HugeFan!    Tuesday 22 December 2009, 15:41    #

I think my favorite parts are the perspectives of the elements (the dawn light and the temperature), but I loved the whole story.
The healer was definitely my favorite character, that old dude was awesome.
I’m also very glad Aragorn got his rug, he seemed very happy.

— Anna    Tuesday 17 August 2010, 23:09    #

Thank you! This universe still has a special place in my heart…

Anna, the healer takes his work very seriously ;) And rugs are important! I was pleased that you made the rug connection :)

Thank you for reading!

Geale    Wednesday 18 August 2010, 8:47    #

WOW – a bit tired now after reading for the whole night, but I just couldn’t stop. – WOW

Congratulations on the characters you have written for us readers.
The relationship between Aragorn and Faramir sounds far more convincing than most of the other fanfics have them.
The under the table scene gets full points – not for originality, but for very well written indeed.
The healer is a gem – I’d love to see more interaction with him – perhaps some more stories about the royal family?

BTW I was missing the lecture on positions given to Aragorn and Faramir by the healer…. but one can’t have all, can one ?;-)

Thanks for sharing this great story,

— Kathurien    Thursday 30 September 2010, 1:22    #

Thank you so much! It’s great to hear that you enjoyed it!

I’m afraid the healer’s lectures are closed to the public and I can do very little about that. He’s a stubborn one…

I feel very comfortable in this universe but I will honestly say that I have no ideas for another sequel right now (one already exists – Tale Telling). Although, pretty reviews, such as yours, always make me want to write more :)

Thank you again!

Geale    Wednesday 6 October 2010, 19:19    #

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