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Simulacra (NC-17) Print

Written by Vanwa Hravani

09 November 2011 | 30013 words | Work in Progress

XVIII

The afternoon was a fine one. From the balustrade, the world stretched out golden and blue, as if the Citadel really was a ship sailing through the sky to forever beyond the Pelennor Fields. A glorious day for beginnings.

When Haldir arrived at the training grounds, Faramir was already in the ring, coaching some new recruits who had come early for extra practice of yesterday’s drills. He glanced up at the strongly built elf, standing unobtrusively to the side of the gate, and nodded greeting. Haldir watched in admiration as Faramir patiently worked with his charges, managing to make his corrections seem mere suggestions, while at the same time pushing each toward better and better skill.

He saw, too, the open awe and thinly veiled desire in many of the soldiers’ eyes as they gazed upon their respected leader. He knew it for a product both of Faramir’s renowned ability with his weapons and words, and of his fey beauty and graceful familiarity as he handled them. He was singularly disarming and none seemed unaware of his charms – except perhaps the gentle Captain himself. There was no question that his men loved him. As a soldier, Haldir knew this to be the highest compliment awarded a leader. As a man, he felt a twist of jealousy.

When the group was complete, the young Captain called them to attention and introduced the day’s drill.

‘And we are honored to have among us one of Middle Earth’s greatest masters of this elven martial art, the very elf who taught it to me. Please show your respects to Haldir of Lothlorien, who will be working with you today.’

The soldiers’ eyes lingered long on the comely elf warrior, his features haughty and masculine, yet indescribably beautiful. A few lips twitched in thought.

Quickly Faramir returned them to attention, called out pairings and set them to work. He and Haldir moved among them, observing, praising where deserved, correcting stances and grips as necessary.

After half a dozen fight sequences had been taught and drilled for several hours, Faramir thought to call the day. One of the bolder recruits asked permission to speak.

‘Yes, Thirion? What is it?’

‘Sir, I was wondering if we might see our completed goal. Could we see how the sequences look in action?’ Murmured agreement from the group, fascinated, eager. It was clear that they loved this new skill already, and that they had begun to sense the beauty of its dance.

Turning toward Haldir, Faramir glanced questioningly. With a courteous smile, Haldir bowed to him.

‘It would be my pleasure, Captain.’

The recruits cleared the practice ring to lean over its fences; their instructors took up their blades. Moving to the center, they bowed to one another again. Haldir felt the first snake of energy reach out from him to caress his opponent’s hair. He smiled again and Faramir caught his eye. Returned the briefest smile.

They began circling.

As they prowled the edges of the circle, facing one another, gauging strengths, openings, Haldir could almost see the ropes of energy, golden and live, crossing the circle between them, binding them within its centrifugal force. They were two planets orbiting one another, held fast by a celestial energy they could not escape, circling, ever circling.

Who made the first move, no one would remember. A feint, meant only to close the circle, break the pattern, pull them inwards to engagement, and they both followed. The match began in earnest, a spinning mandala of fluid strikes and blocks, sweeping thrusts and lightning dodges. To those watching it was less a battle than an exquisitely choreographed dance, as if each anticipated the other’s moves and stepped, not to counter them, but to encourage and advance while at the same time evading contact. As if they were not opponents, but in this together, creating a whirling display of deadly precision and glittering beauty. Breathtaking and erotic in its speed and grace.

Silence fell over the yard.

The muscles of the onlookers cramped with tension as they watched, enrapt. Still the battle continued. Haldir could sense Faramir was tiring, but they were both still locked in the joy of the dance, the power of their muscles, the grace of movement. He would not best the Captain before his own men. He would end this with dignity. But not yet. Their sweat slicked one another’s skin. This is the closest I’ve been to him in years. Faramir breathed the scent of his old lover, remembering it on other days, in other places. He fought on.

Haldir was upon him, a flurry of flashing blades and whipping hair. Faramir spun, swiftly ducking inside the plane of engagement to meet Haldir chest-to-chest. A sharp clang as their crossed knives caught and locked above their heads. They stood a long moment, panting against one another, arms outstretched, each maintaining the perfect block. Blue eyes met gray, held. The merest nod. They stepped away. Turned to face the others.

The watching soldiers remained silent, the hush of awe, respect for what they had seen heavy upon them. The electric sexuality a shame to dispel. As one, their instructors bowed slightly, and the gathering released itself in applause, whistling its satisfaction.

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38 Comment(s)

I am looking forward to reading more of this – I adore all of the undercurrents in their relationship.

— pinbot    Wednesday 6 August 2008, 20:25    #

Oooooooooooo! Angsty!! Very nicely done. Am hoping to see more of this and how it’ll pan out. Thanks for sharing.

— enkemeniel    Tuesday 12 August 2008, 3:09    #

I am addicted to this series and the complexity of the relationship here. I do a happy dance every time I see that you’ve updated. thanks!

— pinbot    Friday 15 August 2008, 2:58    #

Thanks for the happy feedback. Sorry to have left this so long – I’ve been traveling. So very nice to come home to comments. I’ll get typing soon.

VH

— Vanwa Hravani    Tuesday 18 November 2008, 15:10    #

This is rockin’ my world! So many intense, complex emotions. Can’t wait for more!

— pinbot72    Friday 12 December 2008, 6:31    #

Oh so glad! Hearing that makes all the writing worthwhile. More to come!

— Vanwa Hravani    Friday 12 December 2008, 14:49    #

Woah i love it! When i started to read, well…i just couldn’t stop:) Can’t wait for another chapter gives hugs and a cookie:3

— Shiro    Saturday 13 December 2008, 1:36    #

I cannot believe I haven’t commented on this story yet. It’s a pairing I don’t care for but the story is compelling with the mixed sense of time and some truly incredible bits of writing.

Um, squee?

— Bell Witch    Sunday 14 December 2008, 6:50    #

Sigh. Thank you. I am an absolute whore for feedback, especially from other writers I admire. Say you love me and I’ll write another chapter. Please? Two? (Realistically, I have to anyway. The boys wouldn’t let me sleep last night cause they wanted my attention. Made for some kinky dreams…)

VH

— Vanwa Hravani    Monday 15 December 2008, 19:04    #

Heartbreaking. This goes way beyond angst as we know it… I’m not sure I can bear what may happen after Chapter 19.

— ebbingnight    Thursday 8 January 2009, 5:26    #

Ebbingnight, Letting out big breath. I was really scared to post this one. But I couldn’t sit with it alone anymore. To know someone actually is out there reading it and has taken it the way it felt makes it lighter. Part of me (and Haldir) was afraid no one would care, would think he was too upset over too little. Don’t be afraid to keep reading though. It will get better, I promise. We know it’s not the end for him, right? Thanks for letting me know you’re reading. It means a lot.

— Vanwa Hravani    Thursday 8 January 2009, 12:13    #

With Elrond’s remorse here (for failure to realize how badly the elfing Haldir needed healing so long ago), we’re beginning to understand this “blend that cannot be separated.” Far from “getting better” yet, but absolutely riveting now!

— ebbingnight    Friday 16 January 2009, 2:21    #

To use your earlier word, I find the most ‘heartbreaking’ part to be Elrond’s inability to fix this. We all want to believe he can always fix it, don’t we? But in his own way, Haldir is every bit as strong and complex as Elrond – he has to be to have lived through this. A monumental amount of his energy and determination would be directed at keeping things together. Which means that trying to heal him after the fact would be far harder than working with a weaker person would be. Elrond recognizes now that by shaping Haldir into the consummate strong warrior he is (to help him survive),he and Galadriel actually made him virtually unheal-able. Since they weren’t able to heal his spirit and mind before, they added centuries of armor over its flaws. How can they now do anything to help? It is because Haldir is so strong and so able that he is condemned to this pain. The weak can die or be healed; survivors live with suffering. Now that’s heartbreaking.

Okay, so maybe I lied about it getting better…

— Vanwa Hravani    Friday 16 January 2009, 19:58    #

Oh, the risks being taken here…. but if I flinch and look away, I won’t be able to see what might come next!

— ebbingnight    Saturday 24 January 2009, 3:50    #

Ebbingnight,

In truth, I’m not sure I can go on either. I know what has to happen. I know many of the later scenes, but taking the steps to get there is too hard. I don’t want to watch either. Can I just skip to what comes after?

— Vanwa Hravani    Saturday 24 January 2009, 16:20    #

Vanwa,

Included in the “risks” I mentioned above are the ones you’ve been taking all along as a writer in getting us to walk with you through this darkness: please, please don’t lose your nerve now!

— ebbingnight    Saturday 24 January 2009, 16:30    #

You do know how to win me over, don’t you? I think you and I are alone in this one at the moment, so what comes next is officially for you. But I may have to take baby steps. And if the hole I’m digging gets too deep or too banal, let me know?

I think I’m going to need therapy after this epic is over.

— Vanwa Hravani    Saturday 24 January 2009, 18:36    #

Fascinating how we can see the different shades of darkness here as our eyes grow more accustomed to your world. Lovely, lovely writing about the allure of oblivion wrapped up in a quilt of memories….

— ebbingnight    Tuesday 3 February 2009, 16:00    #

E –

That was for you. Your comment is so beautifully worded it brought a tear to my eye even while I’m smiling. I love what you see in my story. I think perhaps it’s more poetic than anything I actually write. Thank you.

— Vanwa Hravani    Tuesday 3 February 2009, 16:14    #

I am enjoying this very much. This is so awesome the way you weave this story. It took me a few chapters to get on to the flow of the story but I couldnt stop reading. This latest edition is very sad. Poor Faramir. I am so hoping for some happiness for him in the end. And for Haldir too. I like them both. I must admit the Faramir/Haldir pairing is always my first choice for stories. Well done. Thank you for sharing this with us.

— Kelly    Tuesday 3 February 2009, 16:37    #

Thank you Kelly. I feel like I’m peeling an onion here with these characters. When I started, I had a general plan, but I’ve been trying to just be quiet and let their own psychology take the lead. The bits become apparent as they come up, and I feel like I’m exploring and watching as much as I’m writing.

I have been trying to figure out why there is so much dialogue between other characters, which is odd for me. Now I see that these two both live so entirely within their own subjective universes that they share limited points of contact with others: hands, eyes, masked words. So the prolonged honest conversations of more integrated characters become more apparent. It becomes about trying to balance withdrawal and enmeshment at fragile points of contact. I never had any of that in mind.

And yes, I so would like to see some happiness for them both. No promises, but I’ll encourage them.

— Vanwa Hravani    Tuesday 3 February 2009, 18:15    #

I think that this is why these two are my favorites. They are more complex characters. They have this way of being able to shield their true feelings from others. You always wonder what is really going on there. Elves especially I think are harder to figure out. And Faramir, in my oh so humble opinion, is so very elven in nature. I know in the grand scheme of the books and definitely the movies these were minor characters but for me they are the best. I have been so attracted to both of them from the first, Faramir especially.

I forgot to mention before I am extremely fond of the chapter dealing with Haldir helping Faramir with training his rangers. That was wonderful.

— Kelly    Tuesday 3 February 2009, 19:51    #

Ah such tortured souls! I like it! Give me more!

— Kelly    Monday 23 February 2009, 20:47    #

It never even occurred to me to wonder what it might be like outside the Halls of Mandos before reading this. How desolate Haldir must be: but at least he can still hear the voices calling him back from the shoreline of despair. Faramir… doesn’t?

— ebbingnight    Wednesday 25 February 2009, 2:17    #

This is a very interesting point. I wonder if both of them can hear the voices but don’t want to listen because each of them feels they don’t deserve to be saved? Maybe? I guess we’ll have to wait and find out. I cant wait for more. I am so in to this story.

— Kelly    Wednesday 25 February 2009, 16:49    #

Hmmm…Good question. At the risk of spoiling anything, I’ll suggest that Faramir isn’t actually alive in the waking world yet. But once he is, who is there to call to him? We know Aragorn got him out of the actual Halls after the fire, but perhaps a part of him had already taken up residence somewhere in the grey when he was younger. It is safe there. Desolate, yes, but beyond pain. Then again, I think Faramir wants to be called back; at this point, Haldir doesn’t.

PS I promise they’ll have some good sex soon. Keep reading. I won’t leave them here forever.

— Vanwa Hravani    Wednesday 25 February 2009, 16:59    #

Oh this is exciting. You’ve given me just enough to make me even more excited for more. This is fabulous!

— Kelly    Wednesday 25 February 2009, 17:34    #

Stop tempting me! I’m supposed to be working right now!

Sigh. Okay, I’ll just add that I’m thinking about the relationship between hope and trust . One can stand on its own; the other cannot.
As for deserving to be saved, I’m afraid he’s past that. That posits more connection to self-worth than is going on here. Haldir can’t even say ‘I’ anymore, although they’re working him towards ‘(me)’. Right now he’s beyond considering himself as an acting subject, even beyond object. ‘I don’t deserve saving’ would be recognizing himself as a subject. ‘They shouldn’t be saddled with me’ would be himself as an object. He’s past that to ‘not worth it. hurts.’ To go intentionally back into pain would require either trust that things will be better, hope that things can be better, or complete surrender to pain/not pain being beyond control or mattering. But at that point, how do you compel someone who has nothing left to lose?

Okay, now I must get back to work. More later. Promise!

— Vanwa Hravani    Wednesday 25 February 2009, 18:37    #

Sorry I’ve been gone so long. I wrote myself into a corner and can’t figure the way out. But I’m working on it. If anyone is still out there, give me a couple weeks and I should have something for you. (I think I promised you sex…)

— Vanwa Hravani    Tuesday 5 May 2009, 16:06    #

Oh I’m excited I get to get back into this story again. I have missed it. Looking forward to it.

— Kelly    Tuesday 5 May 2009, 16:17    #

Time is of the essence in your world, but not in the usual sense, so I have endless patience (and hopes) for seeing you round that corner with this fic! But, yes, you’re far from forgotten here….

— ebbingnight    Tuesday 5 May 2009, 18:38    #

I love this story.
I am so sorry that I haven’t let you know this before. You are such a marvelous writer.
Currently I am in the hospital and the only thing I can do is to sit by the internet. Until now I have been forced to use the hospitals computers. You can´t read stories like these on those, can you :)
But now a good friend of mine brought my own. Thank God!! I have missed all of this. This story was the first one I red. I have red it many times but never commented it. For that I am truly sorry.
Love it and thank you for bringing me such joy

— Fëawen    Monday 8 February 2010, 19:28    #

Fëawen,

Your message made my day. Thank you for the compliments and for enjoying. I’m sorry you’re stuck in hospital, but I’m glad to help make the time more bearable. I know how boring it can be, especially without something good to read. Now that you’re on your own private computer, maybe I need to post a really steamy chapter for your pleasure…

Say, I have been wanting to finish this story forever, yet have been stuck and losing motivation. I know where it’s going, but I’m having trouble making myself go there. If you’re still convalescing, what do you say to brainstorming/motivating with me? Give you something to do, get me writing on this again. Let me know if you’re game. (And if anyone else is reading this and wants to chat too, chime in!)

Above all else, healthy recovery.

VH

— Vanwa Hravani    Wednesday 17 February 2010, 0:58    #

Oh I would love to get back into this story again. I know where I hope the story is going. However, I’m so desperate to throw these two together I would not make it much of a story I’m afraid. Something steamy would be much appreciated. Maybe a certain King needs to place himself more in the middle of these two and push them towards each other a few too many times for them to ignore the burning attaction/affection they have for one another. Maybe? Anyway you do it I’m more than happy to be along for the ride.

Feawen sorry you are stuck in the hospital. Bummer! If you need something to do however there are a lot of great stories here to help you along. Speedy recovery to you.

— Kelly    Wednesday 17 February 2010, 21:12    #

Oh Thank you both so much! (send you two a big hug)
I can hardly wait for a new chap (rubbing my hands and grin) I would be thrilled to be involved, it would be a fantastic honor. I guess i am going to be stuck here for a good time since they have no idea why I am sick or what it is that’s causing it

You are so right, Kelly. I am so impressed by the authors on this site. You are all amazing.

— Fëawen    Wednesday 17 February 2010, 21:32    #

I have been trying to get in touch with you. I wrote a swap story for you called Waiting on the Moon. I’m in the process of reworking it and would love to hear from you and find out if there is something else you would like me to add that I didn’t have in there the last time. When you reply put “Moon” in the subject line so I will know it’s from you. Do you have a lj?
Lucky

— Lucky aka Getty    Sunday 25 March 2012, 15:29    #

Hi

Don’t know if you’re still writing this but I wanted to let you know much I am enjoying it. LOVE Faramir fiction but Haldir/Faramir ones are my favourite (normally because they’re the longest due to full stories having to be described) You write beautifully and this is a very interesting story with dimensions I haven’t read before. Many of the stories deal with abuse but you handle it sensitively and with great tact. I hope you are still writing this and manage to finish it. It may be too much to ask for a happy ending, but a healing ending perhaps??

Keep up the good work and I will probably now read anything you’ve written!

B x

— Insertnamehere    Sunday 23 September 2012, 21:10    #

Wonderful and exciting, hope you finish it soon,would love to see it finished…

— Blondie    Wednesday 5 February 2014, 21:17    #

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