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If you can't see me as who I am, then why bother? (NC-17) Print

Written by Laivindur

22 April 2012 | 74699 words | Work in Progress

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Chapter sixteen

Because of the progress the white city was doing, the steward wanted his sons to work harder to perhaps push the borders further. Boromir was sent to Rohan to gain information and perhaps some negotiations with the horsemen, while Faramir was sent to Ithilien to search and spy for possible cooperation between Mordor and Harad.

To be a very good continue… ;P

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4 Comment(s)

Why no comments yet, I wonder. This is a wonderfully complex story with equal measures of drama, emotion, and humour. Especially liked Denethor’s memories of Boromir teasing Faramir through the years. Hope you’ll continue. Cheers!

— LN Tora    Wednesday 14 March 2012, 20:59    #

Yey, thank you! I will continue :) So tune up for more ^^

— Laivindur    Thursday 15 March 2012, 21:44    #

Oh…my…gosh… this story is amazing! I read it straight through, beginning with chapter one and halting at chapter fifteen. I look forward so much to your next update! This is very well written, and though there are a few grammatical errors here and there, it is nothing that distracts from the story.

Waiting in anticipation…

An Avid Reader.

— AvidReader    Saturday 28 April 2012, 5:49    #

Oooh, thank you so much for that encouraging comment :D I’m glad you don’t feel the grammar destroys your story experience, pewh!
I am actually going through it over again to correct and add :)
Thank yuo so much! Much appreciated!!

— Laivindur    Monday 30 April 2012, 15:57    #

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