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I, Faramir (PG-13) Print

Written by Surreysmum

21 February 2011 | 7582 words

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Day 6

You are always loved, my Steward, my Faramir. And you will be desired, always desired, as you have been from the moment we met. But never, never coerced. I swear it, I swear it on everything I hold dear. Always loved, Faramir.

That is what Aragorn was saying in Sindarin that night.

This is foolish, a useless exercise. I refuse to continue.

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6 Comment(s)

I liked this one. Things like this can get a bit sappy, but this was written in a way people really think, at least my own thoughts tend to phrase themselves similarly. Thanks!

— Mandy    Monday 27 November 2006, 0:46    #

Thank you, Mandy! I consciously decided against “Tolkienesque” language in favour of the more informal tone of a diary for this one – glad it worked for you!

— Surreysmum    Monday 27 November 2006, 1:14    #

I really, really enjoyed this! I loved the subtle will they, won’t they between Faramir and Aragorn throughout, and even though Faramir’s decision at the end was a little bittersweet, it made sense in this universe and I really liked that. I’m not so much a slash-fan as I am a fan of good, believable writing and this was certainly a joy to read, it flowed so well, like Mandy I really liked the informal tone- it sets up the idea of the diary very well indeed. Seeing Aragorn and Eowyn’s points of view at the end was a very nice touch as well (I loved the line ‘I’ll Wynnie him…‘ ,ha!) Well done and thank you for sharing such a lovely and well written story! :)

— Eora    Monday 28 February 2011, 20:42    #

It pleases me very much that you enjoyed it, Eora!

— surreysmum    Monday 28 February 2011, 21:43    #

I like it. Not too sweet, definitely not whining. A good start.

— alcardilme    Wednesday 2 March 2011, 4:41    #

Thank you!

— surreysmum    Wednesday 2 March 2011, 15:15    #

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